Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise. For example, instead of repeating 'in the university' and 'among all the libraries', you could say: "I often go to the university library, especially Fisher Library, which I prefer because of its convenient location near eateries and facilities like water fountains and vending machines."

Example: I often visit the university library, particularly Fisher Library, because it is conveniently located near several eateries and has useful facilities such as water fountains and vending machines.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. For example, instead of 'most of I would mostly be there for revert revising', say 'I usually go there to revise my previous units'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'most of the time' and 'mostly'.

Example: I usually visit the library during the final exam period to revise my previous units because I find it easier to concentrate in a quiet environment compared to my noisy university accommodation.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid vague expressions like 'some of the bookstore ask libraries for me' and ensure correct verb forms. Also, try to provide more specific details to enrich your answer. For example, you could say: "Unfortunately, there was no public library near my hometown, so I mostly bought my own books from bookstores."

Example: Unfortunately, there was no public library near my hometown, so I mostly bought my own books from local bookstores.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and contains grammatical errors. Instead of focusing on intelligence, try to directly address the question about library usage. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. For example, you could say: "I'm not certain, but I believe many Chinese children do go to libraries because education is highly valued in their culture."

Example: I'm not certain, but I believe many Chinese children visit libraries regularly because education is highly valued in their culture.

× It has a very convenient location which near to most of the eateries around that region, as well as a convenient water fielding station and a multiple vending machines.

✓ It has a very convenient location which is near most of the eateries around that region, as well as a convenient water filling station and multiple vending machines.

The phrase 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' should be used without 'to' in this context. Also, 'water fielding station' seems to be a typo and should be 'water filling station'. 'A multiple vending machines' is incorrect because 'multiple' implies more than one, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× Most of the time I will only visit the library when it approach the final exam period and most of I would mostly be there for revert revising my previous unit's content.

✓ Most of the time I only visit the library when it approaches the final exam period and I am mostly there to revise my previous unit's content.

The modal verb 'will' is unnecessary here as the sentence refers to habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate. 'It approach' should be 'it approaches' to agree with the singular subject. 'Most of I would mostly be there for revert revising' is awkward and incorrect; 'I am mostly there to revise' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And I found it very useful to revise in a quiet area as I can't really concentrate in areas with lots of noise, such as my university accommodation.

✓ And I find it very useful to revise in a quiet area as I can't really concentrate in areas with lots of noise, such as my university accommodation.

The sentence mixes past tense 'found' with present tense context. Since the statement is about a general truth or current habit, present tense 'find' is appropriate.

× Back in my hometown there wasn't any high quality library or even Public Library near my neighborhood and so I would say most of the books I have was bought by myself.

✓ Back in my hometown there wasn't any high quality library or even a public library near my neighborhood, so I would say most of the books I have were bought by myself.

'Was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'most of the books'. Also, 'Public Library' should not be capitalised unless it is a proper noun, and 'a' is needed before 'public library'.

× And yeah I would say some of the bookstore ask libraries for me but not really a Li a common library.

✓ And yeah, I would say some of the bookstores acted like libraries for me, but not really a common library.

'Bookstore' should be plural 'bookstores' to match 'some of'. 'Ask libraries' is incorrect; likely intended 'acted like libraries'. 'Li a' seems to be a typo and should be removed. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× To be honest I'm not sure since I'm not Chinese but I believe so since most Chinese students are very smart and they are from from my experience in the university where most of my friends in master degree are Chinese, they seems to be very knowledgeable about their countries and also global affairs.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure since I'm not Chinese, but I believe so because most Chinese students are very smart. From my experience at university, where most of my friends in the master's degree are Chinese, they seem to be very knowledgeable about their countries and also global affairs.

'From from' is a repetition error; only one 'from' is needed. 'In the university' should be 'at university' for natural English usage. 'Friends in master degree' should be 'friends in the master's degree'. 'They seems' should be 'they seem' to agree with plural subject. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for preposition and agreement errors.