Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I sometimes go to the library to prepare for my IELTS because it is quiet there, which helps me focus on my reading."

Example: Yes, I sometimes go to the library to prepare for my IELTS because it is quiet there, which helps me focus on my reading.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. For example, "Most of the time, I like to read new books in the library. Nowadays, I also use the library to prepare for my IELTS exam."

Example: Most of the time, I like to read new books in the library. Nowadays, I also use the library to prepare for my IELTS exam.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not study much then. Also, I could easily study at home since the studies were not difficult at that time."

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not study much then. Also, I could easily study at home since the studies were not difficult at that time.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to add clarity. For example, "Yes, not only Chinese kids but children from many countries often go to the library to do their homework and focus on their studies."

Example: Yes, not only Chinese kids but children from many countries often go to the library to do their homework and focus on their studies.

× Yes, sometimes I go to library for preparation of my IELTS because in library there is quite so I can focus into my reading.

✓ Yes, sometimes I go to the library for preparation of my IELTS because in the library there is quiet so I can focus on my reading.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'quiet' is the correct adjective to describe a calm environment, and the preposition 'on' is used with 'focus'.

× In library most of time I usually like to do reading of some of new books and nowadays I'm trying to do my preparation of IELTS in the library.

✓ In the library most of the time I usually like to read some new books and nowadays I'm trying to do my preparation for IELTS in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'most of the time'. 'Do reading' is incorrect; 'like to read' is appropriate. Also, 'preparation for IELTS' is the correct phrase.

× No, when I was a kid, I I was not going on the library because at that time I was not doing too much study and in my house I can easily do my studies and at that time there were not a tough study and today there is tough.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I did not go to the library because at that time I was not studying much and I could easily do my studies at home. At that time, studies were not tough, but today they are tough.

The past tense 'did not go' is correct instead of 'was not going'. 'Do too much study' is incorrect; 'studying much' is better. 'Can' changes to 'could' for past ability. 'There were not a tough study' is incorrect; rephrased for clarity and correct tense.

× Yes, not just Chinese but every country kids go in library for their homeworks and focus on their studies.

✓ Yes, not just Chinese but kids from every country go to the library for their homework and focus on their studies.

The preposition 'to' is used with 'go' when indicating destination. 'Homework' is uncountable, so 'homeworks' is incorrect. Also, 'kids from every country' is clearer than 'every country kids'.