Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'just buy books online and then just read them'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then support it with reasons.

Example: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books online. For instance, I usually buy e-books and read them on my phone or laptop, which is more convenient for me.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your points logically. Also, be specific about why you read certain books in the library and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I usually read specialized books in the library that are expensive to buy, such as nursing textbooks. Therefore, it is more convenient for me to access them there.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past, and try to separate ideas into clear sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your past and present habits.

Example: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I wasn't interested in reading. However, now I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. It's better to express your lack of knowledge clearly and briefly, and avoid unnecessary details. Use simple and direct language.

Example: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I haven't met many Chinese children.

× I don't go to library because books are available online.

✓ I don't go to the library because books are available online.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× So what I do is that I will just buy books online and then just read them through my phone or my laptop, which should make this convenient for me.

✓ So what I do is that I just buy books online and then read them through my phone or my laptop, which makes this convenient for me.

Using 'will' in this context is unnecessary because the speaker is describing a habitual action, not a future event. Also, 'should make' is better replaced with 'makes' to indicate a general truth or habitual convenience.

× I usually read books in the library which are not available outside.

✓ I usually read books in the library which are not available elsewhere.

The phrase 'not available outside' is vague and awkward. 'Elsewhere' is a better choice to indicate places other than the library. However, this is more about word choice than a strict grammar error, so this correction is optional.

× For example the nursing books. Those books are available outside but it cost a lot which make it convenient for me to to read them inside the book because.

✓ For example, the nursing books. Those books are available outside but they cost a lot, which makes it convenient for me to read them inside the library.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'books'. Also, 'cost' should be 'cost' (present tense plural) and 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the situation. The phrase 'inside the book' is incorrect; it should be 'inside the library'. The sentence is also incomplete and awkward, so it has been rephrased for clarity.

× When I was a kid I don't go to library because I was not interested to read books and up until now I I'm still not interested to read books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I was not interested in reading books, and up until now, I'm still not interested in reading books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

The verb tense should be past tense 'didn't go' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the'. The phrase 'interested to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'interested in reading'. Commas are added for clarity.

× When I was a kid I don't go to library because I was not interested to read books and up until now I I'm still not interested to read books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I was not interested in reading books, and up until now, I'm still not interested in reading books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

The phrase 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it is a specific place. This is a common article error.

× I was not interested to read books and up until now I I'm still not interested to read books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

✓ I was not interested in reading books and up until now I'm still not interested in reading books, but I try to read at least once a week to improve my English.

The correct preposition after 'interested' is 'in', and the verb should be in the gerund form 'reading' rather than the infinitive 'to read'.

× I don't have any idea for Chinese kids if they go to libraries because I never encounter people like them up until now.

✓ I don't have any idea whether Chinese kids go to libraries because I have never encountered people like them up until now.

The phrase 'I don't have any idea for Chinese kids if they go to libraries' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I don't have any idea whether Chinese kids go to libraries'. Also, 'encounter' should be in the present perfect 'have never encountered' to indicate experience up to now.