Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'distraction' instead of 'destruction' and 'a place that provides' instead of 'library a place that provide'.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a peaceful and quiet environment for studying. I usually visit especially during exams, as I need to concentrate without distractions. Moreover, the library offers a wide range of books that help me in my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant with good content. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, and be careful with spelling (e.g., 'Usain Bolt' instead of 'Hussain Bolt'). Also, you can add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

Example: I usually read autobiographies of famous personalities such as Neeraj Chopra, Milkha Singh, Helen Galloway, and Usain Bolt. Their sacrifices and achievements inspire me to overcome challenges in my own life.

Suggestion: Your answer is good with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words like 'especially' more naturally. Also, correct minor grammar issues such as 'when I was a kid'.

Example: Yes, I used to visit the library quite often when I was a kid. I especially enjoyed reading storybooks because they sharpened my mind and sparked my imagination. Additionally, the quiet environment helped me concentrate better on my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more coherent by using proper linking words and correct grammar. Also, avoid repeating the word 'study' too often and be more specific.

Example: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them concentrate better. Moreover, schools and colleges encourage students to visit the library for research purposes.

× Yes, definitely I often go to the library because library a place that provide me peaceful and quiet environment for my study without any destruction.

✓ Yes, definitely I often go to the library because the library is a place that provides me a peaceful and quiet environment for my study without any distraction.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' to specify the particular place. Also, the sentence was missing the verb 'is' after 'library'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'library'. 'Destruction' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'distraction'.

× Yes, definitely I often go to the library because library a place that provide me peaceful and quiet environment for my study without any destruction.

✓ Yes, definitely I often go to the library because the library is a place that provides me a peaceful and quiet environment for my study without any distraction.

The verb 'provide' must agree with the singular subject 'library', so it should be 'provides'.

× I usually visit the library during my exam because at that time I need peaceful environment for my study without any distraction or additionally library offer by trains of books for me that's helped me in my study.

✓ I usually visit the library during my exams because at that time I need a peaceful environment for my study without any distraction. Additionally, the library offers a range of books that help me in my study.

The phrase 'during my exam' should be 'during my exams' to indicate multiple exam periods. 'Offer by trains of books' is incorrect; it should be 'offers a range of books'. Also, 'that's helped me' should be 'that help me' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× I usually visit the library during my exam because at that time I need peaceful environment for my study without any distraction or additionally library offer by trains of books for me that's helped me in my study.

✓ I usually visit the library during my exams because at that time I need a peaceful environment for my study without any distraction. Additionally, the library offers a range of books that help me in my study.

'Exam' should be plural 'exams' to refer to multiple exam periods. 'Trains of books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a range of books'.

× Definitely, I used to go to the library quite often when I was kid.

✓ Definitely, I used to go to the library quite often when I was a kid.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'.

× Definitely, I used to go to the library quite often when I was kid.

✓ Definitely, I used to go to the library quite often when I was a kid.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before the singular noun 'kid'.

× I also like the quiet environment which helped me concentrate better on my studies.

✓ I also liked the quiet environment which helped me concentrate better on my studies.

Since the sentence refers to past time ('when I was a kid'), the verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to maintain tense consistency.

× As Chinese kids often go to the library for their study because there they can easily concentrate on their study, school and colleges motivate them to visit library for research purpose also.

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library for their studies because there they can easily concentrate. Schools and colleges also motivate them to visit the library for research purposes.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'Study' should be plural 'studies'. 'School and colleges' should be 'Schools and colleges'. 'Visit library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Research purpose' should be plural 'research purposes'. The sentence was split for clarity and grammatical correctness.