Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I used to' multiple times. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. For example, mention what kind of books you read or what you learned.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a student because I enjoyed reading books about different subjects, especially education. It helped me learn new things and improve my knowledge.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to keep your sentences complete and avoid trailing off. Provide specific activities you do in the library.

Example: Usually, I read books in the library, and if I feel tired, I take short breaks to rest. Reading there is enjoyable because I always learn new things from the books.

Suggestion: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'That's all, thank you.' Also, use correct tenses and linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.

Example: I don't remember going to the library much as a kid, but I visited it often during my teenage years with my classmates. We enjoyed reading books and exploring new topics together.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by using correct prepositions and sentence structures. Avoid repeating 'children' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: From what I know, Chinese parents often take their kids to the library so they can learn new things, expand their knowledge, and interact with other children.

× I used to read the books.

✓ I used to read books.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because 'books' is a general plural noun. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I enjoyed it because I learned more things about. Education.

✓ I enjoyed it because I learned more things about education.

The period after 'about' incorrectly breaks the sentence. 'Education' should be part of the same sentence without a period, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Frankly, when I was a student, I used to read books the same time.

✓ Frankly, when I was a student, I used to read books at the same time.

The phrase 'the same time' requires a preposition 'at' to be grammatically correct. Adding 'at' clarifies the timing of the action.

× If I am tired, I used to rest.

✓ If I was tired, I used to rest.

The conditional clause refers to past habitual actions, so the past tense 'was' should be used instead of the present tense 'am'.

× Reading books made me enjoy because I used to learn new things from the books itself and.

✓ Reading books made me enjoy it because I used to learn new things from the books themselves.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'it' after 'enjoy' completes the sentence. Also, 'books itself' should be plural 'books themselves' to agree with the plural noun.

× I cannot remember exactly if I went to the library when I was a kid, but surely I visit more often when I was a teenage in the library, of course, together with my classmate and enjoy reading books and exploring new things.

✓ I cannot remember exactly if I went to the library when I was a kid, but surely I visited more often when I was a teenager in the library, of course, together with my classmates and enjoyed reading books and exploring new things.

The verbs 'visit' and 'enjoy' should be in the past tense 'visited' and 'enjoyed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'teenage' should be 'teenager' and 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' to agree with the context.

× As what I know, Chinese kids were often sent by their parents in the library for them to learn new things, expand their knowledge as well to mingle with others children and it is a way of interacting other children.

✓ As far as I know, Chinese kids are often sent by their parents to the library to learn new things, expand their knowledge, as well as to mingle with other children, and it is a way of interacting with other children.

The phrase 'As what I know' is incorrect; 'As far as I know' is the correct expression. 'Sent by their parents in the library' should be 'sent by their parents to the library' because 'to' indicates direction. 'Others children' should be 'other children' without 's'. Also, 'interacting other children' requires the preposition 'with' to be correct.