Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh', and use past and present tenses correctly. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

Example: When I was a child, I often went to the library because my primary school had a reading lesson there. However, now that I am older, I rarely visit the library and usually get information from the Internet instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly what you usually do in the library, use correct verb forms, and provide specific details. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: When I was in primary school, I usually used the computers in the library to watch educational animations, which helped me learn in a fun way.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently, use past tense consistently, and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid filler words to sound more natural.

Example: Yes, I went to the library when I was a child because my primary school had reading lessons there. It gave me the opportunity to enjoy reading time with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures, and try to provide a clear comparison between past and present habits using linking words for coherence.

Example: In the past, Chinese children often went to the library to find information or do homework. However, nowadays, they do not visit libraries as frequently because there are many other ways to access information, such as the Internet.

× Basically, when I was child, I usually go to library because there is a reading lesson in my primary school and, umm, recently when I grew up.

✓ Basically, when I was a child, I usually went to the library because there was a reading lesson in my primary school and, umm, recently when I grew up.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' and 'is' should be 'was'. Also, 'child' needs the article 'a' and 'library' needs 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Basically, when I was child, I usually go to library because there is a reading lesson in my primary school and, umm, recently when I grew up.

✓ Basically, when I was a child, I usually went to the library because there was a reading lesson in my primary school and, umm, recently when I grew up.

The noun 'child' requires the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'library' is a specific place here, so it needs the definite article 'the'.

× So, uh, there, there were less, less chance for me to go to the library.

✓ So, uh, there were fewer chances for me to go to the library.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'chance' is countable, so 'fewer' is correct. Also, 'chance' should be plural 'chances' to match 'fewer'.

× So, uh, recently I, uh, got the information from the Internet or just my.

✓ So, uh, recently I have got the information from the Internet or just my...

The sentence is incomplete but 'recently' suggests present perfect tense is appropriate. 'Got' should be 'have got' to indicate recent action with present relevance.

× I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I love go to the library because there are the computer we can get asset of it.

✓ I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I loved going to the library because there was a computer we could use.

'The computer' is incorrect here because it is singular and unspecified; 'a computer' is correct. Also, 'love go' should be 'loved going' to match past tense and correct verb form.

× I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I love go to the library because there are the computer we can get asset of it.

✓ I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I loved going to the library because there was a computer we could use.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'love' should be 'loved' and 'are' should be 'was' to agree with singular 'computer'.

× I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I love go to the library because there are the computer we can get asset of it.

✓ I still remember when I was a student in my primary school, I loved going to the library because there was a computer we could use.

After 'love' in past tense, the verb should be in the gerund form 'going' rather than the base form 'go'.

× So I I usually will use the computer and watch some animation that time.

✓ So I usually used the computer and watched some animations at that time.

The sentence refers to past habits, so 'will use' should be 'used' and 'watch' should be 'watched'. Also, 'animation' is countable here and should be plural 'animations'.

× Yes, umm, definitely when I was a kid, uh, there are the, umm, reading lesson in my primary school.

✓ Yes, umm, definitely when I was a kid, uh, there was a reading lesson in my primary school.

The event happened in the past, so 'are' should be 'was'. Also, 'reading lesson' is singular and needs the indefinite article 'a'.

× So, uh, I have to attend it, it, it, I had to attend it.

✓ So, uh, I had to attend it.

The sentence is about past obligation, so 'have to' should be 'had to'. The repetition is unnecessary and should be removed.

× And so, uh, there's, uh, provide me the chance to go to library and I can, uh, enjoy the reading time with my friend that time.

✓ And so, uh, it provided me the chance to go to the library and I could enjoy reading time with my friends at that time.

'There's' (there is) is incorrect for past tense; 'it provided' is correct. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match context. 'Can' should be 'could' for past ability.

× And so, uh, there's, uh, provide me the chance to go to library and I can, uh, enjoy the reading time with my friend that time.

✓ And so, uh, it provided me the chance to go to the library and I could enjoy reading time with my friends at that time.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because it implies more than one friend.

× I think for kids, kids that in the past they will usually went to the library because they have to find some information or they have to do some homework at that time.

✓ I think for kids, in the past they usually went to the library because they had to find some information or do some homework at that time.

'Will usually went' is incorrect; 'usually went' is correct past tense. 'Have to' should be 'had to' to match past tense.

× But nowadays I thought kids are I will not often go to the library because there are many way to get the information.

✓ But nowadays I think kids do not often go to the library because there are many ways to get information.

'Thought' is past tense but 'nowadays' indicates present, so 'think' is correct. 'Are I will not' is incorrect; 'do not' is correct. 'Way' should be plural 'ways'.