Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct verb tenses and grammar to make your answer more natural and clear. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas effectively. For example, say "I often went to the library when I was at university because I stayed there until midnight to do coursework; it felt like my second home."

Example: I often went to the library when I was at university because I stayed there until midnight to do coursework; it felt like my second home.

Suggestion: Focus on using complete sentences with proper grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. For example, "I usually do university coursework and group projects in the library because it has free internet, quiet places, and spacious areas for discussions."

Example: I usually do university coursework and group projects in the library because it has free internet, quiet places, and spacious areas for discussions.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "I did not often go to the library as a child because I was shy and preferred staying in class. However, I sometimes went with friends to do homework or research."

Example: I did not often go to the library as a child because I was shy and preferred staying in class. However, I sometimes went with friends to do homework or research.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer by using proper grammar and vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases and be more specific. For example, "I am not sure why, but some Chinese children do not often go to the library. From my experience, some go there to do university work or study on weekends."

Example: I am not sure why, but some Chinese children do not often go to the library. From my experience, some go there to do university work or study on weekends.

× Yeah, I often going to library when I was at uni.

✓ Yeah, I often went to the library when I was at uni.

The phrase 'I often going' is incorrect because 'going' is a present participle and needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. However, since the sentence refers to a past time ('when I was at uni'), the simple past tense 'went' is appropriate here. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yeah, I often going to library when I was at uni.

✓ Yeah, I often went to the library when I was at uni.

The noun 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I always stay at library until midnight, do some work, coursework and life is like my second home so.

✓ I always stayed at the library until midnight, did some work and coursework, and the library was like my second home.

The verb 'stay' should be in the past tense 'stayed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'do' should be 'did' for past tense consistency. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'life is like my second home so' is unclear and corrected to 'the library was like my second home' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always stay at library until midnight, do some work, coursework and life is like my second home so.

✓ I always stayed at the library until midnight, did some work and coursework, and the library was like my second home.

'Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'.

× I used to do some uni work like coursework, settlement assignment, so sometimes I do do some teams work like a group project.

✓ I used to do some uni work like coursework and settlement assignments, and sometimes I did some team work like group projects.

The phrase 'do do' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'did'. 'Settlement assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. 'Teams work' should be 'team work'.

× Do it in library, it's more easy, got free Internet, nice players, big spares for me to do discussions there.

✓ Doing it in the library is easier; it has free Internet, nice places, and big spaces for me to have discussions there.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. 'Players' is likely a mishearing or typo and corrected to 'places'. 'Spares' is corrected to 'spaces'.

× You not really going to buy real.

✓ I didn't really go to the library.

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'You not really going to buy real' seems to be a misconstructed sentence. Corrected to 'I didn't really go to the library' to fit the context and proper pronoun use.

× While I was scared I always going to stay in my class.

✓ While I was scared, I always stayed in my class.

'Always going' is incorrect; the past tense 'stayed' fits the context better. Also, a comma is added after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I used to go into library when my friend asked him to go to like do some homework there or do some research but not like every week every weekend.

✓ I used to go to the library when my friend asked me to go there to do some homework or research, but not every week or every weekend.

'Asked him' is incorrect; it should be 'asked me' as the subject is the speaker. 'Go into library' is corrected to 'go to the library' with the definite article. The phrase is restructured for clarity.

× I used to go into library when my friend asked him to go to like do some homework there or do some research but not like every week every weekend.

✓ I used to go to the library when my friend asked me to go there to do some homework or research, but not every week or every weekend.

'Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Now I always stay in my home or class.

✓ Now I always stay at home or in class.

'Stay in my home' is unnatural; the correct preposition is 'at home'. Also, 'in class' is the correct phrase without 'my'.

× I'm not sure why that some Chinese can not offer going to the library.

✓ I'm not sure why some Chinese children do not often go to the library.

The phrase 'can not offer going' is incorrect and unclear. Corrected to 'do not often go' to express frequency properly. 'That some Chinese' is simplified to 'some Chinese children' for clarity.

× I know it because I was, I have travelled with Chinese kid.

✓ I know this because I have travelled with Chinese kids.

'I was' is incomplete and unclear; removed for clarity. 'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to match context. Present perfect 'have travelled' is correct.

× They not often going to library but some them do like for example they do some uni work or on the weekend on something like that.

✓ They do not often go to the library, but some of them do, for example, they do some uni work on the weekend or something like that.

'Not often going' is incorrect; corrected to 'do not often go' for present simple tense. 'Some them' corrected to 'some of them'. Added commas for clarity.