Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "library in my school often close" nên là "the library in my school is often closed". Bạn cũng nên tránh dùng câu quá dài và không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I don't often go to the library because the one at my school is usually closed. However, I hope they will improve the facilities and keep it open more regularly in the future.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "go there to reading books" nên là "go there to read books" và "do exercise" có thể gây hiểu nhầm, nên nói rõ là "do exercises related to my studies" hoặc "practice skills". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ như "also" hoặc "in addition" để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually go to the library to find resources that help with my studies. In addition, I read books and sometimes chat with my friends there.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng, ví dụ "I and my friend often go" nên là "my friend and I often went". Bạn cũng nên tránh nói những câu ngắt quãng như "It's actually a ball game. Yes." mà nên giải thích rõ hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, when I was in primary school, my friends and I often went to the library to play educational games, such as ball games. Besides, we also enjoyed reading comics there.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ "Erica's in our own country of the world" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, dùng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "shoot 5 books". Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library. They usually borrow several books to improve their skills and knowledge.

× Actually I have never gone to the library because the library in my school often close so we can use this for study.

✓ Actually I have never gone to the library because the library in my school often closes so we can use it for study.

The verb 'close' should be in the third person singular present tense 'closes' to agree with the singular subject 'library'. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'it' to correctly refer to the library.

× Actually I have never gone to the library because the library in my school often close so we can use this for study.

✓ Actually I have never gone to the library because the library in my school often closes so we can use it for study.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to the library; 'it' is the correct pronoun for singular objects.

× But I hope in the future my school will improve library facility and keep it open more regularly.

✓ But I hope in the future my school will improve the library facilities and keep it open more regularly.

The noun 'library facility' should be pluralized to 'library facilities' to correctly refer to multiple facilities. Also, adding 'the' before 'library facilities' is necessary for correct article usage.

× Yeah, I often go to the library to find resources which can help for my study.

✓ Yeah, I often go to the library to find resources which can help with my study.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'help with' is the correct collocation when referring to assistance in studying.

× Besides, I go there to reading books and do exercise and sometime I will chatting with my friend in the library.

✓ Besides, I go there to read books and do exercises and sometimes I will chat with my friend in the library.

After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'reading' should be 'read'. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match the context. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Will chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'will chat'.

× Of course, when I was in primary school I and my friend often go to the library and find some games.

✓ Of course, when I was in primary school my friend and I often went to the library and found some games.

Since the time is in the past ('was in primary school'), the verbs should be in past tense: 'go' to 'went' and 'find' to 'found'. Also, the pronoun order should be 'my friend and I'.

× It's actually a ball game.

✓ It's actually a ball game.

No correction needed for this sentence.

× Yes. Beside we find the comics to read it.

✓ Yes. Besides, we find comics to read.

'Beside' is incorrect; the correct word is 'Besides' as a conjunctive adverb. 'The comics' can be 'comics' without 'the' for general reference. 'To read it' is redundant; 'to read' suffices.

× Yes. I'm not sure about it, but I think Erica's in our own country of the world, they often go to the library because when we go to the library, we shoot 5 books to improve my skill and improve my knowledge.

✓ Yes. I'm not sure about it, but I think in our country, people often go to the library because when we go to the library, we borrow 5 books to improve our skills and knowledge.

'Erica's in our own country of the world' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'in our country'. 'They' should be 'people' for clarity. 'Shoot 5 books' is incorrect; 'borrow 5 books' is appropriate. 'My skill' should be 'our skills' to match the plural subject 'we'.