Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve vocabulary by using words like 'genres' instead of repeating 'books'.

Example: Yes, I often visit the Public Library in my city because it has a wide range of books. For example, I enjoy reading different genres such as fiction, novels, and short stories, which keeps me interested and helps me discover new authors.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correcting grammar. Provide specific reasons why you prefer the reference section and avoid vague phrases.

Example: Usually, I spend time in the reference section because it contains many useful books that I cannot borrow. This helps me to explore new knowledge and support my further education effectively.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar. Use correct expressions and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague or incorrect phrases like 'receive the library' or 'visit the light'.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I didn't have a membership. Instead, I spent my free time cycling and enjoying other hobbies. However, after growing up, I started visiting the library regularly.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a more natural response. Also, use 'the internet' instead of 'Internet' and avoid redundancy.

Example: No, Chinese kids don't often visit the library because they prefer using mobile phones and other devices. Moreover, they usually improve their knowledge by accessing information on the internet.

× Mostly I like fictions and novels and short stories.

✓ Mostly I like fiction, novels, and short stories.

The word 'fictions' is incorrect because 'fiction' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'fiction' to refer to the genre in general.

× They have many books for reference.

✓ They have many reference books.

The phrase 'books for reference' is less natural than 'reference books' which is the correct plural noun phrase to describe books used for reference.

× I search for things for my further education and they are.

✓ I search for things for my further education.

The phrase 'and they are' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity.

× So I would like to be in the reference sections and explore new knowledge.

✓ So I would like to be in the reference section and explore new knowledge.

The term 'reference section' is usually singular when referring to a specific area in a library. Using plural 'sections' is incorrect here.

× No, actually I didn't receive the library when I was a child because I didn't have the membership in the library.

✓ No, actually I didn't use the library when I was a child because I didn't have membership in the library.

The verb 'receive' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'use' to indicate going to or utilizing the library.

× I didn't have the membership in the library.

✓ I didn't have membership of the library.

The correct preposition with 'membership' is 'of' rather than 'in' when referring to belonging to an institution.

× So when I was a kid, I spent my free time like using cycling and other hobbies.

✓ So when I was a kid, I spent my free time doing cycling and other hobbies.

The phrase 'like using cycling' is incorrect. The correct form is 'doing cycling' or simply 'cycling' as an activity.

× So when I grow up, I used to visit the light.

✓ So when I grew up, I used to visit the library.

The phrase 'when I grow up' should be in past tense 'when I grew up' to match 'used to'. Also, 'light' is a typo and should be 'library'.

× No, no, they they don't often visit the library.

✓ No, no, they don't often visit the library.

The repetition of 'they' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'they'.

× They use the mobile phone and other technological devices to spend their free time and they improve their knowledge by using Internet, so they don't visit.

✓ They use mobile phones and other technological devices to spend their free time and improve their knowledge by using the Internet, so they don't visit the library.

'Mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match general usage. 'Using Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'the library' clarifies the meaning.