Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more organized and clear. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you go to the library using simple and correct sentences. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I need to study. I find it easier to concentrate there because my house is noisy, with kids making sounds. So, the library helps me focus better for my exams.

Suggestion: Give a clear and complete answer. Start with a topic sentence about your usual activities in the library. Use linking words to explain your reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Example: Usually, I study for my exams in the library because I want to get high marks. I focus on reviewing my lessons carefully to prepare well for school tests.

Suggestion: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use simple sentences to explain why you did not go to the library as a child. Avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because my family did not encourage me. They were worried about distractions like phones and other things that might affect me.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and directly. If you are unsure, say so politely. Use simple sentences and avoid unclear or irrelevant information. Try to give a reason or example if possible.

Example: Actually, I am not sure because I live in Kuwait. But I think many Chinese kids go to the library because they like to learn and improve their knowledge.

× Yes, I do so I go there because I want to if I want to study or I want to be focused about my about my study.

✓ Yes, I do, so I go there when I want to study or when I want to focus on my studies.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'if' and 'be focused about' which is not proper English. The verb 'focus' should be followed by 'on' and the phrase should be 'focus on my studies'. Also, 'if I want to' is better replaced with 'when I want to' to indicate habitual action.

× If I have exam because in my house there are many noisy because the kids make the noisy on the plane in my room, I come in angry, but.

✓ If I have an exam, because my house is very noisy due to the kids making noise in my room, I get angry.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'Noisy' is an adjective, but 'noise' is the noun needed here. 'Make the noisy on the plane' is incorrect; it should be 'making noise in my room'. Also, 'come in angry' is better expressed as 'I get angry'. The article 'an' is needed before 'exam'.

× Actually, when I go to the library, I go if I have the exam in my school to get full mark in this exam and I focus about myself 'cause I want to get a high mark in my class on my school because I am in the high school, I want to get the high mark and go to the.

✓ Actually, when I go to the library, I go if I have an exam at my school to get full marks in the exam and I focus on myself because I want to get a high mark in my class at my school since I am in high school. I want to get high marks and go to the...

The sentence has incorrect prepositions ('focus about' should be 'focus on'), article usage ('an exam'), and plural forms ('full marks'). Also, 'in my school' is better as 'at my school'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as much as possible.

× No, I am never go there when I kids because my family is not on that because care about me and care because there are many big like the phone comes to me or make anything is not good about me come give me the OR want to tell me because my family don't accept that.

✓ No, I never went there when I was a kid because my family did not allow it. They cared about me because there were many dangers like strangers coming to me or doing things that were not good for me. My family did not accept that.

The sentence has incorrect verb tenses ('am never go' should be 'never went'), missing auxiliary verbs, and unclear phrasing. 'When I kids' should be 'when I was a kid'. 'My family is not on that' is incorrect; 'did not allow it' is better. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× Reality and actually I don't know about that because my phone is Kuwait, but I think yes because it's so professional peoples in the Chinese and have the many invention it is want to learn and each other people about the benefits things about this world and want to come #1.

✓ Actually, I don't know about that because my home is in Kuwait, but I think yes because there are many professional people in China who have many inventions. They want to learn from each other about the beneficial things in this world and want to come number one.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions ('my phone is Kuwait' should be 'my home is in Kuwait'), incorrect plural forms ('peoples' should be 'people'), and unclear phrasing. 'In the Chinese' is incorrect; 'in China' is correct. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.