Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because my work as a dentist keeps me very busy, so I prefer to read at home."

Example: I don't often go to the library because my work as a dentist keeps me very busy. Therefore, I prefer to read books at home during my free time.

Suggestion: Your answer is indirect and a bit confusing. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. For example, "I don't visit the library now, but when I was a student, I used the library to study dental textbooks and practice related skills."

Example: I don't visit the library now, but when I was a student, I used the library to study dental textbooks and practice related skills.

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and be more specific. For example, "Yes, I enjoyed going to the library as a child because I could read many new novels, especially those for children."

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to the library as a child because I could read many new novels, especially those for children.

Suggestion: Your answer is hesitant and includes unnecessary filler words. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to organize your ideas. For example, "I am not sure about Chinese children, but in my culture, Persian children often visit libraries to read and study."

Example: I am not sure about Chinese children, but in my culture, Persian children often visit libraries to read and study.

× Well, as a professional in dentistry I couldn't go any libraries or studying anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

✓ Well, as a professional in dentistry, I can't go to any libraries or study anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before, so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

The modal verb 'couldn't' is incorrect here because the speaker is talking about a current inability, so 'can't' is appropriate. Also, 'go any libraries' is incorrect; it should be 'go to any libraries' (preposition issue). 'Studying anything' should be 'study anything' to match the modal verb 'can't'.

× Well, as a professional in dentistry I couldn't go any libraries or studying anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

✓ Well, as a professional in dentistry, I can't go to any libraries or study anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before, so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

The phrase 'go any libraries' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go to any libraries'. Prepositions are necessary to show relationships between words.

× Well, as a professional in dentistry I couldn't go any libraries or studying anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

✓ Well, as a professional in dentistry, I can't go to any libraries or study anything because I work a lot and I have no time to practice more than before, so I prefer to stay at home and read by myself.

After modal verbs like 'can't', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'studying' should be 'study'.

× Well as I said that earlier, I don't go to library anymore so I can't say about this question, but when I was studying dentistry I usually did practice in my major.

✓ Well, as I said earlier, I don't go to the library anymore, so I can't answer this question, but when I was studying dentistry, I usually practiced in my major.

The sentence has several issues: missing articles ('the library'), awkward phrasing ('can't say about this question' should be 'can't answer this question'), and incorrect verb form ('did practice' should be 'practiced'). Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× Well as I said that earlier, I don't go to library anymore so I can't say about this question, but when I was studying dentistry I usually did practice in my major.

✓ Well, as I said earlier, I don't go to the library anymore, so I can't answer this question, but when I was studying dentistry, I usually practiced in my major.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect.

× Well as I said that earlier, I don't go to library anymore so I can't say about this question, but when I was studying dentistry I usually did practice in my major.

✓ Well, as I said earlier, I don't go to the library anymore, so I can't answer this question, but when I was studying dentistry, I usually practiced in my major.

The phrase 'did practice' is awkward and unnecessary; the simple past tense 'practiced' is sufficient and correct here.

× Yes, of course. I really enjoy being in libraries because I had a chance to actually reading new novels, especially childhood 1, so I read a lot and. Enjoy the most.

✓ Yes, of course. I really enjoyed being in libraries because I had a chance to actually read new novels, especially Childhood 1, so I read a lot and enjoyed it the most.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past context. 'Reading' should be 'read' (base form) after 'to'. The sentence fragment 'and. Enjoy the most.' is corrected to 'and enjoyed it the most.' for clarity and completeness.

× Yes, of course. I really enjoy being in libraries because I had a chance to actually reading new novels, especially childhood 1, so I read a lot and. Enjoy the most.

✓ Yes, of course. I really enjoyed being in libraries because I had a chance to actually read new novels, especially Childhood 1, so I read a lot and enjoyed it the most.

After 'to' in 'a chance to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'reading' should be 'read'.

× Yes, of course. I really enjoy being in libraries because I had a chance to actually reading new novels, especially childhood 1, so I read a lot and. Enjoy the most.

✓ Yes, of course. I really enjoyed being in libraries because I had a chance to actually read new novels, especially Childhood 1, so I read a lot and enjoyed it the most.

The sentence fragment 'and. Enjoy the most.' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be combined properly to 'and enjoyed it the most.' to complete the thought.

× Well, actually as a Persian girl, I don't know about the Chinese cultures or uh, actually their kids, but about my, uh, Persian people, yes, of course they go to libraries, uh, very often, so.

✓ Well, actually, as a Persian girl, I don't know about Chinese culture or their kids, but regarding Persian people, yes, of course, they go to libraries very often.

'Chinese cultures' should be 'Chinese culture' as culture is generally uncountable here. 'About my, uh, Persian people' is awkward; 'regarding Persian people' is clearer. Also, unnecessary fillers and commas are removed for clarity.