Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, use 'spare time' without 'a'. Also, start with a clear topic sentence and add a reason using linking words.

Example: I don't go to the library often because I have little spare time. However, I hope to visit more frequently in the future when I have more free time.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks coherence and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about what kind of books or information you look for.

Example: In the library, I usually read books and search for information related to my projects because it offers extensive resources that are sometimes more reliable than the internet.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use simple past tense correctly and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, clarify the last sentence for better understanding.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library often when I was a child. But now, I don't have much free time to visit it.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct subject-verb agreement. Also, explain reasons clearly using linking words.

Example: I think Chinese kids do go to the library, but not very often because nowadays they can access information online through ebooks and other digital resources.

× I don't have many spare time

✓ I don't have much spare time

The word 'time' is an uncountable noun, so 'much' should be used instead of 'many'. 'Many' is used with countable nouns, but 'time' in this context is uncountable, so 'much spare time' is correct.

× I wish I had a spare time to go to the library in the future

✓ I wish I had spare time to go to the library in the future

The phrase 'a spare time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'. The correct form is 'spare time' without 'a'.

× I usually read a book and also find information to my projects

✓ I usually read books and also find information for my projects

'A book' suggests one book, but usually people read multiple books, so plural 'books' is more natural. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose or relation to 'my projects'.

× find information to my projects

✓ find information for my projects

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate purpose or relation is 'for'.

× Because library is an extent source of information

✓ Because the library is an extensive source of information

The noun 'library' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'extent' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'extensive' to describe a large amount of information.

× Because library is an extent source of information

✓ Because the library is an extensive source of information

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× an extent source of information

✓ an extensive source of information

The word 'extent' is a noun, but an adjective is needed here. The correct adjective is 'extensive' to describe a large amount or range.

× you can find them many many sources and information that you can find in the Internet

✓ you can find many, many sources and information that you can find on the Internet

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'in the Internet' should be 'on the Internet' because 'on' is the correct preposition for the Internet.

× in the Internet

✓ on the Internet

The correct preposition to use with 'Internet' is 'on', not 'in'.

× I had gone to the library when I was a kid

✓ I went to the library when I was a kid

The past perfect tense 'had gone' is unnecessary here because the sentence simply states a past action without reference to another past event. Simple past 'went' is appropriate.

× I don't have many free time to go there

✓ I don't have much free time to go there

'Time' is uncountable, so 'much' should be used instead of 'many'.

× I think China's kids goes to the library

✓ I think China's kids go to the library

The subject 'kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'go' without 'es'.

× in our past pace of the world we can use online information

✓ in our past pace of the world, we could use online information

The phrase is unclear; 'pace' might be a mistake for 'phase' or 'age'. Also, 'can' should be 'could' to refer to past ability. A comma is added for clarity.