Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "it's provide" should be "it provides". Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "quiet and distraction free environment" and "helps me concentrate better" without linking them smoothly. Try to use linking words like "because" or "so that" to connect your ideas more naturally. Also, use singular possessive form "library's resources" instead of "libraries resources".

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet and distraction-free environment, which helps me concentrate better. I usually go there to focus on my homework and prepare for exams. Additionally, I use the library's resources, such as books and computers, to support my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats the phrase "in the library" unnecessarily and has some minor grammatical issues. To improve, start directly with your main point and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same information. For example, instead of saying "The library In the library", just say "I usually do my homework in the library". Adding more specific details about the group projects or discussions would enrich your answer.

Example: I usually do my homework and sometimes prepare for exams in the library. Moreover, my friends often join me, and we work on group projects or have discussions together. This quiet environment helps me focus better.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical errors. For example, "when I Washington when I was a kid" is confusing and should be corrected. Also, "once on a week" should be "once a week". Use linking words like "because" to explain reasons clearly. Try to be more specific about what you enjoyed or learned at the library. Avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on clarity.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. My parents usually took me there once a week, and I used to do my homework and prepare for exams in a quiet environment. I really enjoyed spending time there because it helped me concentrate and learn better.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. For example, "the Chinese kids" should be "Chinese kids" without "the". The phrase "buy borrowing books" is incorrect; you should say "borrow books". Also, "borrowing book book is quite cheaper than a buying book on self" is confusing and should be rephrased. Try to use linking words like "because" to explain reasons clearly. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment for studying and focusing on their future careers. They also borrow books from the library because it is much cheaper than buying books themselves.

× Yes, I often go to the library because it's provide a quiet and distraction free environment which helps me concentrate better.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet and distraction-free environment which helps me concentrate better.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'distraction free' should be hyphenated as 'distraction-free' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× Sometimes I also use the libraries resources like books and computers to support my studies.

✓ Sometimes I also use the library's resources like books and computers to support my studies.

The phrase 'libraries resources' should be possessive singular 'library's resources' because it refers to resources belonging to one library.

× The library In the library I usually do my homework and sometimes prepare for exams.

✓ In the library, I usually do my homework and sometimes prepare for exams.

The phrase 'The library In the library' is redundant and incorrectly structured. Removing 'The library' at the start and adding a comma after 'In the library' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× My parents usually took me there once on a week and I used to do my homework and prepare for exam in a quiet environment.

✓ My parents usually took me there once a week and I used to do my homework and prepare for exams in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'once on a week' is incorrect; it should be 'once a week'. Also, 'prepare for exam' should be plural 'prepare for exams' to match common usage.

× I really enjoyed spending time there because it helped me focus on learn better.

✓ I really enjoyed spending time there because it helped me focus on learning better.

The verb 'learn' should be in the gerund form 'learning' after the preposition 'on' to form the correct phrase 'focus on learning'.

× Yes, the Chinese kids often go to library for a better and quiet environment for a study and focus on their career.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library for a better and quiet environment for study and to focus on their career.

'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the' as 'go to the library'. Also, 'a study' is incorrect; 'study' is uncountable here and does not need an article. Added 'to' before 'focus' for parallel structure.

× Also they often buy borrowing books from library because borrowing book book is quite cheaper than a buying book on self.

✓ Also, they often borrow books from the library because borrowing books is quite cheaper than buying books on one's own.

The phrase 'buy borrowing books' is incorrect; it should be 'borrow books'. 'From library' needs the article 'the library'. 'Borrowing book book' is repetitive and incorrect; corrected to 'borrowing books'. 'Buying book on self' is incorrect; corrected to 'buying books on one's own' for clarity and correctness.