Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simple past and present tenses correctly and make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid contradictory statements like saying you can't go but then saying you have enough time. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I used to go to the library often when I was younger. However, recently I have been very busy with my job as a school teacher, so I don't have much time to visit the library.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your preferences and examples smoothly.

Example: In the library, I usually read books. I enjoy reading novels, English literature, and poems. For example, my favorite poets are Joshua Mudin in Bengali literature and John Dan in English literature.

Suggestion: There are several grammatical errors here, such as incorrect past tense and double negatives. Try to use correct past tense and simpler sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your meaning.

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was no well-known library in my city where I could study.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and contains incomplete words. Try to give a polite and clear response even if you don't know the answer. Use full sentences and avoid slang or incomplete words.

Example: I am not sure about that because I have never met any Chinese kids to know their habits regarding library visits.

× Yes, I went to the library before my early days, but recently I can't go there because I am busy with my job. I am a school teacher, that's why I can get enough time.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library in my early days, but recently I can't go there because I am busy with my job. I am a school teacher, so I don't have enough time.

The phrase 'I went to the library before my early days' is incorrect because 'before my early days' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'I used to go to the library in my early days' to indicate a past habitual action. Also, 'that's why I can get enough time' is incorrect; it should be 'so I don't have enough time' to express the reason for not going recently.

× I usually read the book on the library.

✓ I usually read books in the library.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside a place like a library. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' to indicate general reading habits.

× I prefer many novels and English literature and poems.

✓ I prefer many novels, English literature, and poems.

The sentence lacks proper commas to separate items in a list. Adding commas improves clarity. Also, 'prefer many novels and English literature and poems' is better expressed as 'prefer many novels, English literature, and poems'.

× No, actually I didn't went to the library when I was a kid because in my city there were no any renowned library wherever I went for a study.

✓ No, actually I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because in my city there was no renowned library wherever I went to study.

The auxiliary 'did' requires the base form of the verb, so 'didn't went' should be 'didn't go'. Also, 'no any' is incorrect; it should be 'no'. 'There were no any renowned library' should be 'there was no renowned library' because 'library' is singular. 'Wherever I went for a study' is better as 'wherever I went to study'.

× No, actually I didn't went to the library when I was a kid because in my city there were no any renowned library wherever I went for a study.

✓ No, actually I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because in my city there was no renowned library wherever I went to study.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect; use either 'no' or 'any' but not both together. Here, 'no' is appropriate to indicate the absence of a renowned library.

× Actually, I have no idea about that because I did not meet any chi, any Chinese kids.

✓ Actually, I have no idea about that because I have not met any Chinese kids.

The present perfect tense 'have not met' is appropriate here to indicate experience up to now. 'Did not meet' is simple past and less suitable when referring to life experience. Also, 'any chi' is incomplete and should be 'any Chinese kids'.