Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and focus on natural phrasing.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library every day during my school days because it was mandatory. This helped me improve my grammar and overall knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better structure and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and use more natural expressions.

Example: I usually go to the library to read comic books because I enjoy them. In my free time, I pick comics to relax and pass the time.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain with simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, when I was under 10 years old and in school, it was compulsory to visit the library twice a day. This helped me develop a habit of reading comic books.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct response, then support it with clear reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: I live in India, so I am not sure about Chinese kids. However, from movies and TV shows, I have noticed that Chinese children are encouraged by their parents to read regularly and gain knowledge from books.

× I went to a library daily in my past school classes as there are there is the rule to go once a once a day to the library to enhance the knowledge about the grammatical and grammar.

✓ I went to the library daily in my past school classes as there was a rule to go once a day to the library to enhance knowledge about grammar.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there are there is' which is redundant and confusing. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' because it refers to a specific library. 'Once a once a day' is repetitive and should be 'once a day'. 'The grammatical and grammar' is incorrect; 'knowledge about grammar' is appropriate. The verb 'are' should be 'was' to match the past tense context.

× As I have interest to read comics so go to library.

✓ As I have an interest in reading comics, I go to the library.

The phrase 'interest to read' is incorrect; it should be 'interest in reading'. Also, 'go to library' lacks the article 'the'. The sentence structure is improved by adding a comma and connecting the clauses properly.

× After going to library I usually pick up the books related to comics and I study the comics books usually at my free time to kill the time.

✓ After going to the library, I usually pick up books related to comics and study comic books during my free time to pass the time.

'Going to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'The books related to comics' can be simplified to 'books related to comics'. 'Comics books' is better as 'comic books'. 'At my free time' should be 'during my free time'. 'To kill the time' is a non-standard phrase; 'to pass the time' is more natural.

× Yes, of course when I'm under a 10 year old I have I'm in school, I there is compulsory to go to a library twice a day.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was under 10 years old and in school, it was compulsory to go to the library twice a day.

'I'm under a 10 year old' is incorrect; it should be 'I was under 10 years old'. 'I have I'm in school' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'and in school'. 'I there is compulsory' is incorrect; 'it was compulsory' is correct. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' as it refers to a specific place.

× Mostly my habits are increa engaged with me from there to le to read comic books.

✓ Mostly, my habits of reading comic books developed from there and stayed with me.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'increa engaged with me from there to le to read comic books'. It is corrected to a clearer form indicating habit development. 'Engaged with me' is not appropriate here; 'stayed with me' or 'continued with me' is better.

× As I live in India I do not know about the Chinese kid but I have seen in the movies and TV series that Chinese kids are more engaged with reading practice as there there is a hab as they make theirs as parents make their children's habitual to reading and gain knowledge from the books as the books are the.

✓ As I live in India, I do not know about Chinese kids, but I have seen in movies and TV series that Chinese kids are more engaged in reading practice because their parents make them habitual to reading and gaining knowledge from books.

The sentence has pronoun errors like 'the Chinese kid' should be 'Chinese kids' for plural consistency. 'There there is a hab as they make theirs as parents make their children's habitual' is incorrect and confusing. It is corrected to 'because their parents make them habitual to reading'. Also, 'from the books as the books are the' is incomplete and removed for clarity.