Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about what you like about the library environment.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library near my workplace because I can find books that help me with my assignments. Moreover, I enjoy the quiet and peaceful atmosphere, which helps me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use clear and concise sentences, and link your ideas logically. Specify what activities you do in the library.

Example: I usually visit the library to research information for my assignments. Additionally, I look for books that summarize past discussions and meetings relevant to my work.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains several grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and provide specific details about your experience as a child.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because it was very close to my home. I enjoyed reading children's books there, which sparked my interest in learning.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but could be improved by adding a general opinion or speculation to show your ability to discuss the topic. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I was born and raised in Nepal, so I don't know much about Chinese kids. However, I imagine that many of them visit libraries regularly to study and read, as education is highly valued in China.

× Yes, I often go to library in my colleagues.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library with my colleagues.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in my colleagues' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate accompaniment.

× I often go to library in my colleagues.

✓ I often go to the library with my colleagues.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'with' should be used to indicate going together with colleagues.

× I can get the book from the library which will help me do my assignment and so also the book which I am interested in to read.

✓ I can get books from the library which will help me do my assignments and also books which I am interested in reading.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'book' when referring to books in general. Also, 'assignment' should be plural to match the context. The phrase 'interested in to read' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in reading'.

× I can get the book from the library which will help me do my assignment and so also the book which I am interested in to read.

✓ I can get books from the library which will help me do my assignments and also books which I am interested in reading.

The phrase 'interested in to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'interested in reading' because 'interested in' is followed by a gerund.

× And also I love the environment, the atmosphere of the library so quiet and peace.

✓ And also I love the environment, the atmosphere of the library; it is so quiet and peaceful.

The adjective 'peace' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'peaceful'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'it is' to connect the description properly.

× I usually go to library when I was back in the collies and also now in my workplace so I can get more information to do my assignments and to get the information from past discussion and meetings that is mentioned in the books which we can find in the library.

✓ I usually go to the library when I was back in the colleges and also now in my workplace so I can get more information to do my assignments and to get information from past discussions and meetings that are mentioned in the books which we can find in the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. 'Collies' is likely a misspelling of 'colleges'. 'Information' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. 'Discussion' and 'meetings' should be plural to match the context. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'discussions and meetings'.

× I usually go to library when I was back in the collies and also now in my workplace so I can get more information to do my assignments and to get the information from past discussion and meetings that is mentioned in the books which we can find in the library.

✓ I usually went to the library when I was back in the colleges and also now in my workplace so I can get more information to do my assignments and to get information from past discussions and meetings that are mentioned in the books which we can find in the library.

The phrase 'I usually go to library when I was back' mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Usually' with past context requires past tense 'went'.

× Yes, I used to go to library when I was kid.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'a' is needed before 'kid' as it is a singular countable noun.

× I used to go there and read the child book.

✓ I used to go there and read children's books.

'Child book' is incorrect; the correct term is 'children's books' to indicate books intended for children.

× There was me too and we knew a book which interest me when I was a child.

✓ I was there too and we knew a book which interested me when I was a child.

'There was me' is incorrect; 'I was there' is correct. 'Interest' should be in past tense 'interested' to match the past context.

× There was me too and we knew a book which interest me when I was a child.

✓ I was there too and we knew a book which interested me when I was a child.

The verb 'interest' should be in past tense 'interested' to agree with the past time frame.

× So yes, I often went to library and when I.

✓ So yes, I often went to the library when I was a child.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'when I was a child' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.