Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons. Also, avoid repeating phrases like "I can say" and clarify time expressions like "at afternoon" to "in the afternoon."

Example: Yes, I sometimes go to my school's library because it's a quiet place where many students study. I usually go there to review my lessons or complete homework, but I don't visit it in the afternoons or other times.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit repetitive and could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases like "quiet place." Also, focus on your own activities first, then mention others if relevant.

Example: Usually, I review my lessons and complete my homework in the library. However, sometimes my classmates use the quiet environment to relax or even take naps.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid repeating phrases like "I can say." Be direct and concise in your response.

Example: No, I wasn't a fan of the library when I was a kid. Now, I sometimes go there, but not very often.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid vague phrases like "from their face" and unsupported opinions. Instead, give a general, clear answer with logical reasoning.

Example: I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I think some of them do go to the library to study because education is very important in China.

× But I'm not a person to go to libraries at afternoon or other parts of the school.

✓ But I'm not a person to go to libraries in the afternoon or other parts of the school.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to parts of the day; 'in the afternoon' is the correct usage for time periods during the day.

× sometimes I can say that my my classmates go there to sleep because it's a quiet place and they can do nothing and just be relaxed in a quiet place.

✓ sometimes I can say that my classmates go there to sleep because it's a quiet place and they can do nothing and just relax in a quiet place.

The phrase 'just be relaxed' is incorrect; 'just relax' is the correct verb form to express the action. Also, the repeated word 'my' is a typographical error.

× No, actually I'm not a fan of library as a kid, but in this age I can say that sometimes I go there, but again, I can say that I rarely go there.

✓ No, actually I'm not a fan of the library as a kid, but at this age I can say that sometimes I go there, but again, I can say that I rarely go there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'in this age' should be 'at this age' to correctly express the current time period.

× I don't have much information about Chinese kids, but as I said, I can say that from their face.

✓ I don't have much information about Chinese kids, but as I said, I can tell from their faces.

The phrase 'from their face' is incorrect; the plural 'faces' is needed to match 'Chinese kids', and 'can say that from' is awkward; 'can tell from' is the correct expression.

× Maybe some of their kids go to the library when they're kids because there are some genius kids in China and there's too smart.

✓ Maybe some of their kids go to the library when they're kids because there are some genius kids in China and they're very smart.

The phrase 'there's too smart' is incorrect; it should be 'they're very smart' to correctly use the plural subject and adjective.