Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors which affect clarity. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say 'I am not a person who often goes to the library, but if I need to study, I prefer using ebooks.'

Example: I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying with ebooks. However, if I need a quiet place, I might visit the library occasionally.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Use the correct tense and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: When I visit the library, I usually look for storybooks and comic books. I enjoy browsing through colourful pictures because they catch my attention and make reading more enjoyable.

Suggestion: There are grammatical errors and awkward expressions in your answer. Use correct articles and verb forms, and express your ideas clearly. For example, say 'Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. My family took me there so I could spend my time productively by reading books.'

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child. My family encouraged me to read there so that I could use my time productively and learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. Also, avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'I come from India, so I am not sure about Chinese kids. However, libraries are common worldwide, so I believe Chinese children also visit libraries to study and use their time productively.'

Example: I am from India, so I don't know much about Chinese kids. But since libraries exist in many countries, I think Chinese children often go there to read and learn.

× I'm not a person who's very much into books, but if I wish to have a but if I wish to, but if I wish to study, I will always go for an ebook.

✓ I'm not a person who's very much into books, but if I wish to study, I will always go for an ebook.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'but if I wish to' which is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence structure and makes it clearer.

× So I'm not a person who always go to library.

✓ So I'm not a person who always goes to the library.

The subject 'who' refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' not 'go'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I am actually went to library when I was young, so during that time I only focus was to take up storybooks and then comic books.

✓ I actually went to the library when I was young, so during that time my only focus was to take storybooks and comic books.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is incorrectly used with the past tense verb 'went'. The correct past tense form is 'I actually went'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'My only focus' is the correct possessive form, and 'take up' is better as 'take' here.

× So when I go to library I always take such things and have a glance at it and I'll be more attracted to the pictures and colourful books.

✓ So when I go to the library, I always take such things and have a glance at them, and I'm more attracted to the pictures and colourful books.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'such things'. 'I'll be more attracted' is better as 'I'm more attracted' to match the habitual present tense.

× Yes, I went to library when I was kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Kid' needs the article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun.

× My family used to take me to the library so that I can get distracted to the books over there and I will be using my time more productive.

✓ My family used to take me to the library so that I could get distracted by the books over there and use my time more productively.

The correct preposition with 'distracted' is 'by' not 'to'. 'Can' should be 'could' to match past tense context. 'Using my time more productive' is incorrect; it should be 'use my time more productively' to use the adverb form.

× So my I've actually spent most of my time in library to make it productive.

✓ So I've actually spent most of my time in the library to make it productive.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'my I've' is incorrect; it should be 'I've'. The sentence is in present perfect tense which is appropriate here.

× This is my hometown is in India. I have no I have no idea about how a Chinese kid goes to library.

✓ My hometown is in India. I have no idea about how a Chinese kid goes to the library.

The sentence 'This is my hometown is in India' is redundant; 'My hometown is in India' is correct. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× And I think library are most common in all the countries all over the world.

✓ And I think libraries are most common in all the countries all over the world.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× So I guess Chinese kids often go to library for using their time more productive.

✓ So I guess Chinese kids often go to the library to use their time more productively.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'For using' is incorrect; it should be 'to use' to express purpose. 'More productive' should be 'more productively' as an adverb modifying 'use'.