Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical errors. For example, 'The libraries near my home is' should be 'The libraries near my home are'. Also, avoid unfinished thoughts like 'Additionally, I'd like to a piece.' Try to keep your answers clear and complete in English (Cambodia).

Example: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I need a quiet place to study or do research. The libraries near my home are well equipped with a wide range of books and resources, which makes it easy for me to find a good place to study. Additionally, I enjoy reading magazines there.

Suggestion: Please pay attention to verb forms and sentence structure. For example, 'I just doing' should be 'I just do' and 'watch video' should be 'watch videos'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly in English (Cambodia).

Example: Usually, I like to study by myself because it is really quiet in the library. Therefore, most of the time I just do my assignments and watch educational videos.

Suggestion: Be careful with past tense forms and sentence clarity. For example, 'when I were a kid' should be 'when I was a kid', and 'he's the one who always has a lot of time and spend a lot of time with me' should be 'he was the one who always had a lot of time and spent a lot of time with me'. Use clear and correct grammar in English (Cambodia).

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I liked to go to the library with my parents. I especially enjoyed going with my dad because he was the one who always had a lot of time and spent a lot of time with me.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to give a full, clear response with specific details and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, explain why Chinese kids go to the library often. Use linking words to make your answer coherent in English (Cambodia).

Example: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read and study. They usually visit the library after school to do homework and borrow books.

× The libraries near my home is well equipped with a wide range of books and resources which make it easy for me to find a good place to study.

✓ The libraries near my home are well equipped with a wide range of books and resources which make it easy for me to find a good place to study.

The subject 'libraries' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Additionally, I'd like to a piece.

✓ Additionally, I'd like a piece.

The phrase 'like to a piece' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct structure is 'like a piece' or 'like to have a piece'. This is a sentence structure error.

× So yeah, most of the time I just doing my assignment and watch video and stuff like that.

✓ So yeah, most of the time I just do my assignment and watch videos and stuff like that.

After 'I just', the base form of the verb should be used, not the present participle 'doing'. Also, 'video' should be plural 'videos' to match the context. This is a verb form and singular/plural issue.

× So when I was when I were a kid, I like to go to the library with my parents.

✓ So when I was a kid, I liked to go to the library with my parents.

The phrase 'when I were a kid' is incorrect; 'was' is the correct past tense for first person singular. Also, 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame. This is a past tense issue.

× As I remember, I liked to go with my dad because he's the one who always has a lot of time and spend a lot of time with me.

✓ As I remember, I liked to go with my dad because he's the one who always has a lot of time and spends a lot of time with me.

The verb 'spend' should be 'spends' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. This is a third person singular issue.

× Well, Chinese kids like to go to the library. They do. They go there very often. I believe that they always.

✓ Well, Chinese kids like to go to the library. They do. They go there very often. I believe that they always do.

The sentence 'I believe that they always.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'do' completes the sentence. This is a sentence structure error.