Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. For example, use 'when I was a child' instead of 'when I was child' and avoid redundancy like 'used to go to library of my own school' which can be simplified. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I would love to go to the library, but recently I haven't been able to because of my busy schedule and the lack of a nearby library. However, when I was a child, I often visited my school library where I enjoyed reading many novels and literature.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the books or authors you like. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: In the library, I usually read my favorite novels, especially those written by Lakshmi Prasad, a renowned Nepalese author. Reading these novels makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it more coherent. For example, say 'when I was a child' and use connectors like 'because' and 'so' properly. Also, try to avoid repeating 'used to go to the library' multiple times.

Example: Yes, I used to visit the library frequently when I was a child because I was interested in science. Since my course books were not enough for my science projects, I went to the library to find reference books and learn more about inventions.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repetition like 'we can we can'. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: In my opinion, Chinese kids often visit libraries. This habit helps them develop creativity and technological skills, which is why China is advanced in these areas worldwide.

× ...because of my busy schedule and availability of library near my area.

✓ ...because of my busy schedule and the availability of a library near my area.

The phrase 'availability of library near my area' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'availability' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'library'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Correct usage is 'the availability of a library near my area.'

× When I was child I used to go to library of my own school where I used to read a lot of novels and literature.

✓ When I was a child, I used to go to the library of my own school where I used to read a lot of novels and literature.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. Also, 'go to library' should be 'go to the library' because 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article when referring to a specific library. Adding commas improves readability.

× The things I often do in the library is reading my favorite novels, book which are written by a very which is written by one of the top writer which is Lakshmi Prasad debut and Nepal.

✓ The things I often do in the library are reading my favorite novels and books which are written by top writers, including Lakshmi Prasad, a debut author from Nepal.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to agree with 'novels'. The original sentence is confusing and contains redundancy and unclear phrases; it has been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The things I often do in the library is reading my favorite novels, book which are written by a very which is written by one of the top writer which is Lakshmi Prasad debut and Nepal.

✓ The things I often do in the library are reading my favorite novels and books which are written by top writers, including Lakshmi Prasad, a debut author from Nepal.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'novels' and the plural subject 'things'. Also, 'writer' should be plural 'writers' to agree with 'books'.

× Yes, I used to go to the library a lot when I was child.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library a lot when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'.

× I used to go to the library for reference book of my science project most of the time because I was interested in science and course book was not enough for the project.

✓ I used to go to the library for reference books for my science project most of the time because I was interested in science and the course book was not enough for the project.

The phrase 'reference book of my science project' should be 'reference books for my science project' to correctly use the preposition 'for' indicating purpose. Also, 'course book' should have the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific book.

× So I used to go to library to explore new things related to science and inventions.

✓ So I used to go to the library to explore new things related to science and inventions.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article.

× Well in my opinion Chinese kids mostly visit library.

✓ Well, in my opinion, Chinese kids mostly visit the library.

The phrase 'visit library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, commas are added after introductory phrases for clarity.

× The thing we can we can see that Chinese are more advanced in technology and their creativity is in world wide and this is the result of going to library in early age.

✓ The thing we can see is that Chinese people are more advanced in technology, and their creativity is worldwide; this is the result of going to the library at an early age.

The phrase 'we can we can see' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'we can see'. 'Chinese' should be 'Chinese people' for clarity. 'Creativity is in world wide' is incorrect; 'worldwide' is an adverb or adjective and should be used as 'creativity is worldwide'. 'Going to library' needs the article 'the'. 'In early age' should be 'at an early age' to use the correct preposition.