Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: I don't often go to the library, but I do visit it when my exams are near because I need a quiet place to study. I also enjoy reading books there as a hobby.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words like 'for example' or 'especially' to add specific details. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: In the library, I usually read books and relax. For example, I enjoy reading Islamic history and novels. I also use the library mainly before exams to focus on my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite clear but contains some grammar errors. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas smoothly. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Example: I don't remember going to the library as a kid because we lived in Islamabad where there was no library nearby. Instead, I studied and read books at home with my siblings.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response and use linking words like 'however' properly. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: I don't know much about Chinese kids' library habits. However, in Pakistan, children usually don't go to libraries often because parents believe studying at home is better.

× I don't go off into the library

✓ I don't go to the library

The preposition 'off into' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate going to a place is 'to'. So, 'go to the library' is the proper phrase.

× I also from my hobbies to reading books

✓ I also enjoy reading books as a hobby

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The phrase 'I also from my hobbies to reading books' is not proper English. It should be rephrased to clearly express that reading books is one of the student's hobbies.

× However, I try to use libraries especially in the time when my exams are near so I need time and.

✓ However, I try to use libraries especially when my exams are near because I need time to study.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. The phrase 'I need time and.' is incomplete. The sentence should be completed and structured properly to convey the intended meaning.

× Definitely the libraries is the place where we can reading and unwinding ourselves.

✓ Definitely, the library is the place where we can read and unwind ourselves.

'Libraries' is plural but 'is' is singular, causing subject-verb disagreement. Also, 'reading' should be 'read' to match the modal verb 'can'. The sentence should use singular 'library' to match the singular verb 'is' or pluralize both.

× where we can reading and unwinding ourselves

✓ where we can read and unwind ourselves

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'reading' and 'unwinding' should be 'read' and 'unwind'.

× I also used libraries as a place for relaxing myself.

✓ I also use libraries as a place to relax.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is unnecessary here. Also, 'used' should be present tense 'use' to match the context of usual activities.

× But I use libraries before my exams place.

✓ But I use libraries before my exams.

The phrase 'before my exams place' is incorrect. 'Place' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'use' is correct if referring to habitual action; if past, it should be 'used'.

× when I was kid, I live with my parents at the home in Islamabad

✓ when I was a kid, I lived with my parents at home in Islamabad

'Was kid' is missing the article 'a'. 'Live' should be in past tense 'lived' to match 'was'. 'At the home' should be 'at home'.

× where there's no library near our house.

✓ where there was no library near our house.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a kid'), 'there is' should be changed to past tense 'there was'.

× I used to study at homes with my siblings

✓ I used to study at home with my siblings

'Homes' is plural but the context suggests a single home, so 'home' is correct.

× I enjoy reading more books at home at that time.

✓ I enjoyed reading more books at home at that time.

Since the sentence refers to a past time ('at that time'), the verb should be in past tense 'enjoyed'.

× how they use open libraries to studies

✓ how they use open libraries to study

The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'study', not 'studies'.

× they stressing themselves

✓ they stress themselves

The verb should be in base form 'stress' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. 'Stressing' is incorrect here.

× in Pakistan's that the kids are usually don't often go to the library

✓ in Pakistan, kids usually don't often go to the library

The phrase is awkward and contains unnecessary possessive 'Pakistan's'. Also, 'usually don't often' is redundant; better to say 'usually don't' or 'don't often'.

× because parents think home is much better for kids as compared to.

✓ because parents think home is much better for kids compared to the library.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It should specify what 'home' is being compared to, such as 'the library'.