Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ như "obviously" không cần thiết và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I'm going" thành "I go" để tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I go to the library every day because it helps me improve my knowledge and prepare better for my school exams.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp như "doing the homework" nên là "do my homework". Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually study and do my homework in the library because I find it quiet and suitable for concentrating.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ không chính xác. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ thừa như "umm" và sửa các lỗi như "I'm go to" thành "I went to". Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Example: Yes, when I was between 5 and 10 years old, I often went to the library during summer to read books, especially comic books.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh nói "I don't know a lot of information" và dùng câu trả lời chắc chắn hơn. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp như "which have" nên là "which has". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

Example: I am not sure about all Chinese kids, but I believe many of them visit libraries regularly because education is very important in China.

× Obviously, yes, I'm going to the library on a daily basis, so that's why I can improve my knowledge and broaden my horizon to have a better score at the school.

✓ Obviously, yes, I go to the library on a daily basis, so that's why I can improve my knowledge and broaden my horizons to have a better score at school.

The phrase 'I'm going' is present continuous, which is used for actions happening now or around now, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so simple present 'I go' is correct. Also, 'broaden my horizon' should be plural 'horizons' as it is an idiomatic expression meaning to expand one's experiences or knowledge. 'At the school' is corrected to 'at school' because when referring to school in general, the article 'the' is not used.

× To be honest, I'm not good at studying in a noisy environment, so that's why all the time I'm going to the library to study and doing the homework.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at studying in a noisy environment, so that's why all the time I'm going to the library to study and do the homework.

After 'to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'doing' should be corrected to 'do'. The phrase 'to study and do the homework' is parallel and grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course. Oh, when I was a kid, like about 5 to 10, umm, on a daily basis in the summertime I'm go to, I was go to the library and reading books, comic books especially.

✓ Yes, of course. Oh, when I was a kid, like about 5 to 10, umm, on a daily basis in the summertime I went to the library and read books, especially comic books.

The phrase 'I'm go to' and 'I was go to' are incorrect; the past tense of 'go' is 'went'. Also, 'reading books' should be 'read books' to maintain past tense consistency. The sentence is corrected to use past tense verbs to match the time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× Oh, I don't know a lot of information about that kind of Chinese, but I think that China is a nation which have a lot of smart students, so that's why I think most of them will go to the library often.

✓ Oh, I don't know a lot of information about that kind of Chinese, but I think that China is a nation which has a lot of smart students, so that's why I think most of them will go to the library often.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'nation'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue where the singular subject requires a singular verb form.