Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use correct grammar such as 'whenever I have spare time' and 'help me improve myself'.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library whenever I have spare time. I enjoy reading nonfiction books because they help me improve myself and develop discipline.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: In the library, I usually read nonfiction books because they help me develop discipline and gain useful knowledge. Moreover, they motivate me to set better goals for my future.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, my school had a big library. My teacher often sent us there to read newspapers so we could learn about what was happening around the world.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use relevant vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'keen in keen interest' and 'when a what a person do'.

Example: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they have a strong interest in learning, especially in subjects like computing. Reading helps them gain knowledge and achieve success in life.

× Yes, whenever I have a spare time, I always try to go to library and read nonfiction books because I am very fond of these kinds of books as these kinds of books are really help me to improve myself and to be in a discipline and to do something which really which really assist me in my.

✓ Yes, whenever I have spare time, I always try to go to the library and read nonfiction books because I am very fond of these kinds of books as these kinds of books really help me to improve myself, to be disciplined, and to do something which really assists me.

The phrase 'a spare time' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is uncountable and should not have an article 'a'. 'Go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'These kinds of books are really help me' is incorrect; 'help' should be in base form without 'are'. 'To be in a discipline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to be disciplined'. 'Which really which really assist me' has repetition and 'assist' should be 'assists' to agree with singular 'something'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× As I mentioned earlier that I love to read nonfiction books because it really helped me to, uh, really help me to develop discipline and give and gain useful knowledge and also help me to, and it also assist me personal development motivates me to set better goals, which will be really helpful in my future.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I love to read nonfiction books because they really help me to develop discipline, gain useful knowledge, assist my personal development, and motivate me to set better goals, which will be really helpful in my future.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'helped' with present context; 'help' should be in present tense to match 'I love'. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to plural 'books'. The phrase 'help me to, and it also assist me personal development motivates me' is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected to a clear list of benefits with proper verb forms and conjunctions. These changes improve tense consistency and sentence structure.

× Yes, in my school days, my school has a big library where my teacher used to send all the students to the library so that we can read a newspaper.

✓ Yes, in my school days, my school had a big library where my teacher used to send all the students to the library so that we could read a newspaper.

The phrase 'my school has' is present tense but the context is past ('in my school days'), so it should be 'had'. 'We can read' should be 'we could read' to maintain past tense consistency. These corrections ensure proper tense agreement in the sentence.

× That what is happening around the world and it is really helpful for everyone to read newspaper and to go to library.

✓ That is what is happening around the world, and it is really helpful for everyone to read newspapers and to go to the library.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'That'. 'Read newspaper' should be plural 'read newspapers' because it refers to newspapers in general. 'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. These corrections fix sentence structure and article usage.

× Yes, I think that Chinese kids really go to library more often than not because some kids are having keen in keen interest in learning computation and become a billionaire in a very young age.

✓ Yes, I think that Chinese kids really go to the library more often than not because some kids have a keen interest in learning computation and becoming billionaires at a very young age.

'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Are having keen in keen interest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a keen interest'. 'Become a billionaire' should be 'becoming billionaires' to match plural 'kids'. 'In a very young age' should be 'at a very young age'. These corrections improve article usage, verb forms, and prepositions.

× So that is why reading is the best thing when a what a person do to become a successful in their life.

✓ So that is why reading is the best thing a person can do to become successful in their life.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect words 'when a what a person do'. It should be simplified to 'a person can do'. 'Become a successful' is incorrect; 'successful' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.