Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'when I', say 'because I feel uncomfortable there, so I prefer studying in my room.'

Example: I don't often go to the library because I feel uncomfortable there. Therefore, I prefer to study in my room where I can concentrate better.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating 'sometimes'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, 'I usually study or meet friends there because the library is a quiet place.'

Example: When I am in the library, I usually study or sometimes meet friends because it is a quiet place ideal for concentration.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammar errors and is a bit unclear. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating phrases. Also, be more specific about the types of books. For example, 'Yes, I often went to the library as a child because it had a wide variety of storybooks, which I loved.'

Example: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library because it had a wide variety of storybooks that I really enjoyed.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I have seen many studying in public places like buses or metros on social media.'

Example: I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because I have seen many of them studying in public places such as buses and metros, according to social media.

× Well, I don't go often to the library because when I am in the library I feel uncomfortable.

✓ Well, I don't often go to the library because when I am in the library I feel uncomfortable.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' to follow correct English adverb placement rules.

× So when I when I decide to study, I prefer study in my room.

✓ So when I decide to study, I prefer to study in my room.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to study' rather than the base form 'study'.

× When I'm in the library, I usually do a study sometimes or sometimes I meet a friend in the library because I think the library is the best place that you can study in the quiet.

✓ When I'm in the library, I usually study sometimes or sometimes I meet a friend in the library because I think the library is the best place where you can study quietly.

The phrase 'do a study' is incorrect; 'study' is used as a verb here. Also, 'in the quiet' should be 'quietly' to correctly use the adverb form.

× Yeah, when I was a kid, I usually go, I usually went to the library because the library had a huge range of had a variety of stories books and I loved the stories book.

✓ Yeah, when I was a kid, I usually went to the library because the library had a huge range of story books and I loved the story books.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'stories books' is incorrect; the correct term is 'story books'.

× I think yes, the Chinese kids often go to the library because when I exploring on social media, I usually see the children children Chinese children that there there are studying books and vehicles like metro or bus bus.

✓ I think yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because when I explore social media, I usually see Chinese children studying books and using vehicles like the metro or bus.

The phrase 'when I exploring' should be 'when I explore' to use the correct verb form. Repetition of 'children' and 'there' is incorrect. Also, 'studying books and vehicles' is unclear; it should be 'studying' and 'using vehicles'. Articles before 'metro' and 'bus' are needed for clarity.