Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid repeating words and ensure coherence by using linking words.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I am very busy preparing for my university exams. Although many students study there, I usually study at my cram school, so I don't have many opportunities to visit the library.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to avoid vague expressions and be more specific about your activities and feelings.

Example: I usually do my homework or study when I go to the library. I don't often read books there because I find reading stressful. However, I prefer studying in the library since it helps me concentrate better than at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear words and grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures, and link your ideas smoothly. Also, be concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library very often as a child because I was very active. I preferred going to the park or skateboarding on the street rather than reading books. I also liked studying other subjects instead of reading.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid uncertain phrases like 'I think I guess' and provide a more structured response with linking words.

Example: I don't know much about Chinese children, but I believe they often go to the library because education is very important in China. Many children start studying seriously from a young age.

× No, I don't often go to the regularly because I was I am very busy doing my studying for university exam, so I don't have any time to go to rivalry or although many students study at rivalry, I study at my crumb school, so I don't have very much opportunity to go to the rivalry.

✓ No, I don't often go there regularly because I am very busy studying for my university exam, so I don't have any time to go to the library. Although many students study at the library, I study at my cram school, so I don't have very much opportunity to go to the library.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'to the regularly' and 'go to rivalry' which should be 'there regularly' and 'go to the library' respectively. Also, 'rivalry' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'library'. Prepositions must correctly indicate location or direction, and the correct noun must be used to convey meaning.

× No, I don't often go to the regularly because I was I am very busy doing my studying for university exam, so I don't have any time to go to rivalry or although many students study at rivalry, I study at my crumb school, so I don't have very much opportunity to go to the rivalry.

✓ No, I don't often go there regularly because I am very busy studying for my university exam, so I don't have any time to go to the library. Although many students study at the library, I study at my cram school, so I don't have very much opportunity to go to the library.

The phrase 'doing my studying' is awkward; 'studying' alone is sufficient. Also, 'crumb school' is a misspelling of 'cram school'. Adjectives and adverbs must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I usually do my homework or study at library.

✓ I usually do my homework or study at the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Without 'the', it sounds incomplete. This is related to article usage but also affects singular/plural noun usage in context.

× I don't really read book even when I go to library because reading is just very stressful for me and also like we can concentrate in library then studying at home.

✓ I don't really read books even when I go to the library because reading is just very stressful for me, and also I can concentrate better in the library than when studying at home.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally. Also, 'like we can concentrate in library then studying at home' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'I can concentrate better in the library than when studying at home.' This corrects quantifier and comparative structure issues.

× No, I didn't go to Revelry very often because I was a very active girl, so I rather went to a park or went skateboard and on the street rather than reading books.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library very often because I was a very active girl, so I preferred going to a park or skateboarding on the street rather than reading books.

'Revelry' is incorrect; the correct word is 'library'. Also, 'went skateboard' is incorrect; the verb should be 'skateboarding' to indicate the activity. 'Rather went to a park' is better expressed as 'preferred going to a park'. Past tense verbs must be used correctly to describe past actions.

× No, I didn't go to Revelry very often because I was a very active girl, so I rather went to a park or went skateboard and on the street rather than reading books.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library very often because I was a very active girl, so I preferred going to a park or skateboarding on the street rather than reading books.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'the street', but 'went skateboard and on the street' is incorrect. The activity should be 'skateboarding on the street'. Also, 'Revelry' is a wrong word; it should be 'library'.

× And also I prefer to study other things rather than reading.

✓ I also prefer to study other things rather than reading.

Starting a sentence with 'And also' is redundant and informal. 'I also' is more appropriate. Pronoun use is correct but sentence structure can be improved for clarity.

× I don't have much knowledge about Chinese kids but I think I guess Chinese kids often go to the library because it is sad that Chinese people very are honestly on studying so I think they ordinary study since they are a child.

✓ I don't have much knowledge about Chinese kids, but I guess Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese people are very honest about studying, so I think they usually study from childhood.

The phrase 'very are honestly on studying' is incorrect; it should be 'are very honest about studying'. 'Ordinary study since they are a child' should be 'usually study from childhood'. Quantifiers and adverbs must be used correctly to express frequency and manner.