Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer richer.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually prefer studying and reading at home. In fact, it's been a long time since my last visit, and I don't find libraries particularly special.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats the same idea and has some unclear sentences. Try to answer directly, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, check grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Although I rarely visit libraries because I find them boring, when I do, I usually read books or study for exams. However, it's been a while since my last visit.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'like a while' and improve sentence coherence with linking words.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library with my parents when I was a kid to buy new books and study together since they had exams. However, I found the library quite boring and it didn't suit my interests.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest and relevant but could be more structured and formal. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'or something.' Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clearer opinion.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese kids since I am Persian, but in Iran, teenagers generally don't find libraries very interesting. Instead, they prefer spending time in more exciting places such as playgrounds.

× No, not really. Because I usually study at home or read books at home, I don't often go to the library.

✓ No, not really, because I usually study or read books at home, so I don't often go to the library.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' followed by a period creates a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence or restructured to form a complete sentence.

× I think it's been a long time since I went to the library last time, and I don't know anything special about libraries.

✓ I think it's been a long time since I last went to the library, and I don't know anything special about libraries.

The phrase 'last time' is redundant when used with 'since'. Also, 'last went' is the correct past tense form here to indicate the most recent visit.

× As I said, I don't usually go to libraries because I find them quite boring, but when I go there I usually read books or study for my exams.

✓ As I said, I don't usually go to libraries because I find them quite boring, but when I do, I usually read books or study for my exams.

The phrase 'when I go there' can be simplified to 'when I do' to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

× But as I say so it's been a long time since I last went to libraries because they're so boring.

✓ But as I said, it's been a long time since I last went to libraries because they're so boring.

The phrase 'as I say so' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as I said'. Also, the sentence should be connected properly without 'so' in this context.

× Is how can people go to library?

✓ How can people go to the library?

The sentence structure is incorrect. The correct question form is 'How can people go to the library?' with the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× Yes I usually went to the libraries with my parents to buy new books and study for like a while with them because they had exams so I could also go with them.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the library with my parents to buy new books and study for a while with them because they had exams, so I could also go with them.

The plural 'libraries' is incorrect here; 'the library' is more appropriate. Also, 'for like a while' is informal and should be 'for a while'. Commas are added for clarity.

× But when I went there I found it really boring and it doesn't match my stylists all.

✓ But when I went there, I found it really boring and it didn't match my style at all.

'Stylists' is incorrect; the intended word is 'style'. Also, tense consistency requires 'didn't' instead of 'doesn't'. 'At all' is the correct phrase.