Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using articles and prepositions correctly. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends, especially when I need books that are hard to find elsewhere. The library is a great place to access a wide range of knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward expressions. Also, try to be more specific about your activities.

Example: When I visit the library, I first check if the book I need is available. If it is, I borrow it and then spend time reading it either there or at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repeating the word 'library' too often and try to vary your vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I remember my school had a large library with a dedicated period for us to visit. We usually went there on Fridays and Saturdays, and I always found it quite interesting.

Suggestion: Try to avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. If you don't know the answer, you can say so clearly and then give a general opinion. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I'm not sure about how often Chinese kids go to the library. However, I believe that most schools encourage students to visit the library because it offers a quiet place to study and access books.

× I believe that the library is a very good place to get the knowledge.

✓ I believe that the library is a very good place to get knowledge.

The word 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and generally does not require the definite article 'the' when used in a general sense. Using 'the knowledge' implies specific knowledge previously mentioned, which is not the case here.

× So I go library on the weekends and especially if I need some books which are not available in the market and library can be really helpful for me to grab those books.

✓ So I go to the library on the weekends, especially if I need some books which are not available in the market, and the library can be really helpful for me to get those books.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the preposition 'to' is necessary after 'go' when indicating a destination. Additionally, 'grab' is informal; 'get' is more appropriate in this context.

× When I go to library, first of all I would like to check the book.

✓ When I go to the library, first of all I would like to check the book.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× What I need is that available or not.

✓ What I need is whether it is available or not.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Using 'whether it is available or not' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× After that I issue the book for me and start reading that book.

✓ After that, I issue the book for myself and start reading it.

The phrase 'for me' is incorrect here; 'for myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun. Also, 'that book' can be replaced with 'it' for conciseness.

× In my school I remember that there was a very big library and there was a separate period for the library.

✓ In my school, I remember that there was a very big library and there was a separate period for the library.

A comma is needed after 'In my school' for correct sentence structure.

× So we used to go to the library especially on Fridays and Saturdays and we really find quite interesting to go to the library.

✓ So we used to go to the library especially on Fridays and Saturdays, and we really found it quite interesting to go to the library.

The verb tense should be past tense 'found' to match 'used to go'. Also, 'find quite interesting' needs an object; 'it' is added for clarity.

× I don't have any idea. Well, I'm not familiar about the Chinese kids like well they go to the library and how often they go to the library.

✓ I don't have any idea. Well, I'm not familiar with Chinese kids, like whether they go to the library and how often they go to the library.

The correct preposition is 'familiar with' not 'familiar about'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× But from my perspective each and everyone and school definitely go to library to get some books and as it provides peace and.

✓ But from my perspective, each and every student and school definitely goes to the library to get some books as it provides peace and quiet.

The phrase 'each and everyone' is incorrect; it should be 'each and every student'. Also, 'go' should be 'goes' to agree with the singular subject 'each and every student'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. The sentence was incomplete and is completed with 'peace and quiet' for meaning.