Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and correct sentences, for example, say "I usually go to the library during my free time because I enjoy being surrounded by different kinds of books." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Example: I usually go to the library during my free time because I enjoy being surrounded by different kinds of books. It helps me relax and learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the question but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say "In the library, I usually read books or chat with my friends about our studies and upcoming plans. Mostly, I read different kinds of books such as fiction and novels."

Example: In the library, I usually read books or chat with my friends about our studies and upcoming plans. Mostly, I read different kinds of books such as fiction and novels.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains some informal expressions and repetition. Try to use more formal and precise language. For example, say "Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I spent most of my time playing games or doing other activities. Therefore, the library was not interesting to me back then."

Example: Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I spent most of my time playing games or doing other activities. Therefore, the library was not interesting to me back then.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical errors. Avoid uncertain phrases like "I'm not sure about the question" and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are intelligent and like to spend time reading books or doing research."

Example: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are intelligent and like to spend time reading books or doing research.

× Yes, I usually go to the library when I have a a leisure time because going to library is my patients and surrounding with the different kinds of book is very amazing as well.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library when I have leisure time because going to the library is my patience and surrounding myself with different kinds of books is very amazing as well.

The phrase 'a a leisure time' contains a repeated article and 'leisure time' is uncountable, so no article is needed. 'Going to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'My patients' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'patience'. 'Surrounding with the different kinds of book' is incorrect; it should be 'surrounding myself with different kinds of books' to use the reflexive pronoun and plural form of 'book'.

× In the library I usually read a book or having some chit chats with my friends about our studies and what we are going in the in the upcoming days.

✓ In the library I usually read a book or have some chit chats with my friends about our studies and what we are going to do in the upcoming days.

After 'or', the verb should be in the base form to parallel 'read'. 'Having' is incorrect here; it should be 'have'. Also, 'what we are going in the in the upcoming days' is incomplete and redundant; it should be 'what we are going to do in the upcoming days'.

× Mostly I read different kinds of books like fiction book, novel book etcetera.

✓ Mostly I read different kinds of books like fiction books, novels, etcetera.

When referring to categories, plural forms 'fiction books' and 'novels' are appropriate instead of singular 'fiction book' and 'novel book'.

× Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because that time I mostly spent my day by playing games or doing or doing any unnecessary things.

✓ Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because at that time I mostly spent my days playing games or doing unnecessary things.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time' to indicate a specific past period. 'Spent my day by playing' is better expressed as 'spent my days playing'. The repeated 'or doing' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× That's why library was not my cup of tea before.

✓ That's why the library was not my cup of tea before.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify it. 'My cup of tea' is an idiom meaning 'not my preference' and is correctly used here.

× I'm not sure about the question but I think maybe Chinese kids often go to the library because they're very intelligent and talent as well, so they prefer to go to the library to enjoy their time by reading books or any finding any research.

✓ I'm not sure about the question but I think maybe Chinese kids often go to the library because they're very intelligent and talented as well, so they prefer to go to the library to enjoy their time by reading books or finding research.

The word 'talent' is a noun; the adjective form 'talented' is needed to describe 'they'. The phrase 'or any finding any research' is incorrect; it should be 'or finding research'. The pronouns are otherwise correctly used.