Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I need to get notes and read magazines. I prefer the library since magazines are expensive to buy outside. Also, the library provides a quiet place to study, which helps me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear and concise answer. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid repeating phrases and try to be specific about your activities in the library.

Example: Usually, I register my details at the library counter. Then, I ask the librarian for help to find the notes I need. After that, I go to the suggested rack, pick up the books, and take notes for my studies.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'but' and 'after' to show contrast and sequence. Avoid unclear phrases and explain your feelings clearly.

Example: When I was a kid, my first school did not have a library or playground. But after I moved to another school, I started going to the library regularly. It was a new experience for me, and I enjoyed reading books there.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Be specific about the types of stories and why kids like them. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to read fascinating stories. They enjoy anime and cartoon stories, as well as fiction books. These stories are popular because they are entertaining and help improve their imagination.

× Yes, I would often go to library to get some notes, letter to my subject and to read some magazine.

✓ Yes, I would often go to the library to get some notes, letters for my subjects and to read some magazines.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'letter' and 'magazine' should be plural to match the context of multiple items. 'Letter to my subject' is corrected to 'letters for my subjects' for clarity and correctness.

× Because in outside I can't able to offer to buy a magazine, it's too much of price and mostly.

✓ Because outside I can't afford to buy a magazine, it's too expensive mostly.

The phrase 'in outside' is incorrect; 'outside' alone is sufficient. 'Can't able to offer to buy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'can't afford to buy'. 'Too much of price' is incorrect; 'too expensive' is the correct expression.

× Well, I'm entering through my library.

✓ Well, I enter the library.

The present continuous 'I'm entering through my library' is incorrect here; simple present 'I enter the library' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'through my library' is incorrect; 'the library' is the correct phrase.

× I enter my role number, name and phone number in the register book and I used and I asked the librarian where should I get this notes and he suggest me the suggest me that rack.

✓ I enter my roll number, name, and phone number in the register book, and I ask the librarian where I should get these notes, and he suggests that rack to me.

'Role number' should be 'roll number'. 'This notes' should be 'these notes' to match plural form. 'He suggest me the suggest me that rack' is incorrect; correct form is 'he suggests that rack to me'. Also, 'I used and I asked' is corrected to 'I ask' for present habitual action.

× You may go and see the tool and I went and pick up the book and taken notes if I.

✓ You may go and see the tool, and I went and picked up the book and took notes.

'Pick up' should be in past tense 'picked up' to match 'went'. 'Taken notes' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'took notes'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I don't have that much of a facilities in when I'm in kid, I'm studying in a small school.

✓ I didn't have many facilities when I was a kid; I studied in a small school.

'That much of a facilities' is incorrect; 'many facilities' is correct for countable plural. 'In when I'm in kid' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'when I was a kid'. 'I'm studying' is changed to past tense 'I studied' to match past time.

× In that school there is no library, there is no playground.

✓ In that school, there was no library and no playground.

Since the context is past, 'there is' should be 'there was'. Also, combining the two sentences improves flow.

× But after I change I migrate to another school.

✓ But after I changed, I migrated to another school.

'Change' and 'migrate' should be in past tense 'changed' and 'migrated' to match the past context.

× I got. I used to go to library.

✓ I used to go to the library.

'I got' is incomplete and unnecessary here. 'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× It's very embarrassing moment because of my life.

✓ It was a very embarrassing moment in my life.

'Embarrassing moment' is a noun phrase; 'very' modifies 'embarrassing' correctly. 'Because of my life' is incorrect; 'in my life' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, past tense 'was' fits the context.

× Yeah, of course Chinese kids are often goes to library to read some fascinating stories like anime stories, some of the cartoon stories they would use to read and and they love to read and fiction stories.

✓ Yeah, of course Chinese kids often go to the library to read some fascinating stories like anime stories and some cartoon stories. They love to read fiction stories.

'Kids are often goes' is incorrect; correct is 'kids often go' (subject-verb agreement). 'Go to library' needs 'the'. 'Would use to read' is incorrect; simplified to 'love to read'. Repetition of 'and' is removed for clarity.