Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'express our views about the study and change our minds with it' which is unclear. Also, 'elaborate atmosphere' is not a common phrase; consider using 'quiet and focused atmosphere'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail using linking words.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library with my classmates because it provides a quiet and focused atmosphere for studying. Moreover, we can discuss our ideas and help each other understand difficult topics better.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. 'Exchange my minds' is incorrect; you could say 'share ideas'. Also, 'strict' is not appropriate to describe the atmosphere; 'quiet' or 'calm' would be better. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Usually, I complete my homework in the library because the atmosphere is quiet and calm. Additionally, I often share ideas with my friends there, which helps me understand the material better.

Suggestion: Your answer has tense inconsistency and unclear phrases like 'exchange our minds'. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I often went to the city library when I was a child because it was very large. I enjoyed reading books there with my friends and sharing ideas, which made it an interesting place for us.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid hesitation phrases like 'was it is maybe'. Use clear and complete sentences. Also, 'lend children to school' is incorrect; you might say 'send children to school'. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Example: I think Chinese children go to the library only occasionally because their parents usually prefer them to study at school. They believe the school's atmosphere is stricter and more disciplined than the library's.

× The elaborate atmosphere is very good for study.

✓ The elaborate atmosphere is very good for studying.

The word 'study' is a noun here, but the sentence requires a gerund form 'studying' to function as the object of the preposition 'for'. Using 'studying' correctly indicates the activity that the atmosphere supports.

× I always. Accomplish my homework in the library and always exchange my minds with my friends in in there because I think the atmosphere there is very strict and quiet.

✓ I always accomplish my homework in the library and always exchange my thoughts with my friends there because I think the atmosphere is very strict and quiet.

The original sentence has a misplaced period causing a sentence fragment. 'Exchange my minds' is incorrect; 'minds' should be singular or replaced with 'thoughts'. The phrase 'in in there' is redundant; 'there' suffices. Also, 'the atmosphere there' can be simplified to 'the atmosphere' as the location is clear.

× Yes, I always go to the city library because it is very large and I was delighted in it with my friends to exchange our minds and read books.

✓ Yes, I always went to the city library because it was very large and I was delighted to be there with my friends to exchange our thoughts and read books.

The question is about past habits, so 'go' should be in past tense 'went'. 'It is' should be 'it was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Delighted in it' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'delighted to be there'. 'Exchange our minds' is incorrect; 'exchange our thoughts' is appropriate.

× I think it's very interesting place for our when when we were kids.

✓ I think it was a very interesting place for us when we were kids.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'very interesting place'. 'Our' is a possessive adjective and incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'us'. The repeated word 'when' is a typographical error and should be removed. Also, tense consistency requires 'was' instead of 'is'.

× I think it was it is maybe occasionally because the Chinese parents are always lend children to school because they think the school's atmosphere is more stricter.

✓ I think it is maybe occasional because Chinese parents always send their children to school because they think the school's atmosphere is stricter.

'Was it is' is contradictory; the present tense 'is' fits better here. 'Occasionally' is an adverb; 'occasional' as an adjective fits better with 'it is'. 'Are always lend' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'always send'. 'More stricter' is a double comparative; 'stricter' alone is correct.

× It's stricter than the library and the.

✓ It's stricter than the library.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and the' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing the incomplete phrase results in a complete and correct sentence.