Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I don't go to the library often now because I am busy with my job, but I used to visit it frequently during my university days.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but some sentences are awkward and repetitive. Use linking words and correct prepositions to make your answer more natural and coherent.

Example: People usually go to the library to read quietly, and I do the same. Sometimes, I borrow books to take home and study for my university courses and other projects.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but some grammar mistakes and awkward phrases reduce clarity. Try to use correct expressions and linking words to improve fluency.

Example: When I was a kid, my father often took me to the library. He usually read newspapers while I enjoyed reading comic books. The library was very close to my home, so it was convenient to access the books.

Suggestion: Your answer has relevant content but contains grammar errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary to express your ideas clearly and naturally.

Example: I believe Chinese kids often go to the library. I have read articles and watched videos showing that they enjoy visiting libraries frequently and reading various kinds of books to expand their knowledge.

× Actually, no. I used to go to library very often in my university life, but now I have a job and I'm very busy in my daily life, so it's not possible to go to library very often.

✓ Actually, no. I used to go to the library very often in my university life, but now I have a job and I'm very busy in my daily life, so it's not possible to go to the library very often.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Generally people go to the library to read the book quietly. I also go to library for the same reason. Sometimes I borrow some books from library to take away and take the book to home and to study for my universities and my other projects.

✓ Generally people go to the library to read books quietly. I also go to the library for the same reason. Sometimes I borrow some books from the library to take away and take the books home to study for my university and my other projects.

First, 'the book' should be plural 'books' because people usually read multiple books in a library. Second, 'go to library' and 'borrow some books from library' need the definite article 'the' before 'library' as it is a specific place. Third, 'take the book to home' is incorrect; it should be 'take the books home' without 'to' because 'home' is used without a preposition in this context. Also, 'universities' should be singular 'university' unless referring to multiple institutions, and 'my other projects' is correct.

× When I was a kid, my father used to take me to the library. He generally reads newspaper and I used to read comic books from the library. The library was just beside my home and it was a great convenient to access the comic books easily.

✓ When I was a kid, my father used to take me to the library. He generally reads the newspaper and I used to read comic books from the library. The library was just beside my home and it was very convenient to access the comic books easily.

'Reads newspaper' requires the definite article 'the' before 'newspaper' because it refers to a specific type of newspaper reading habit. Also, 'a great convenient' is incorrect; 'convenient' is an adjective and should be preceded by an adverb like 'very' instead of 'a great' which is used with nouns.

× I saw some articles and saw some YouTube videos that shows Chinese kids are very much fond of library.

✓ I saw some articles and some YouTube videos that show Chinese kids are very much fond of the library.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to plural antecedents 'articles and videos', so the verb should be plural 'show' instead of singular 'shows'. Also, 'fond of library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× They goes to library very often and they used to read books of various.

✓ They go to the library very often and they used to read books of various kinds.

The subject 'They' requires the base form of the verb 'go' without 'es'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'books of various' is incomplete and should be 'books of various kinds' to be grammatically correct.