Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Instead of 'very rare', say 'very rarely'. Also, provide a complete sentence with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. For example, you can say why the distance affects your visits.

Example: I rarely go to the library because it is located far from my city, which makes it inconvenient for me to visit frequently.

Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'it is very interesting question'. Start directly with your answer. Use clearer linking words and organize your ideas logically. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases like 'some science questions about life'.

Example: In the library, I usually read books related to current affairs, scientific topics about life, and materials related to my course to help me with my studies.

Suggestion: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'I I'. Use correct verb forms such as 'I do not remember well'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: I don't remember clearly, but during my school days, I used to visit the library on weekdays according to the timetable, where I read many books.

Suggestion: Try to give a more complete and confident answer. Even if you are unsure, you can express your opinion politely and add reasons or examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve sentence structure.

Example: I am not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do visit libraries because schools encourage reading and provide access to books.

× Well, I use this library very rare because it is far away from my city.

✓ Well, I use this library very rarely because it is far away from my city.

The adverb 'rare' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb form is 'rarely' to modify the verb 'use'. In English, adverbs ending with '-ly' are used to describe how an action is performed.

× Well, I am not remember well about visiting to the library, but yes in my school days I used to visit library in the week in the weekdays according to the timetable and I I read their many books.

✓ Well, I do not remember well visiting the library, but yes, in my school days I used to visit the library during the weekdays according to the timetable and I read many books there.

The phrase 'I am not remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not remember' as 'remember' is a verb that requires auxiliary 'do' in negative present tense. The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'remember'. Also, 'visiting to the library' should be 'visiting the library' as 'visit' does not require 'to'. 'In the week in the weekdays' is redundant; 'during the weekdays' is correct. 'I I read their many books' has repetition and wrong pronoun; it should be 'I read many books there'.

× I visit the library and read many books related to current affairs, some science questions about life and the most topics about my current field that I have to pursue my course in.

✓ I visit the library and read many books related to current affairs, some scientific questions about life, and mostly topics about my current field that I have to pursue in my course.

The phrase 'some science questions' is better expressed as 'some scientific questions' to correctly use the adjective form. 'The most topics' is incorrect; 'mostly topics' or 'mostly about topics' is better. The phrase 'that I have to pursue my course in' is awkward; 'that I have to pursue in my course' is clearer. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions.

× I have no idea about this the Chinese visit the library, but it may be.

✓ I have no idea whether the Chinese visit the library, but maybe they do.

The phrase 'about this the Chinese visit the library' is ungrammatical; 'whether' is used to introduce indirect questions. 'It may be' is vague; 'maybe they do' is clearer. Pronoun usage is corrected for clarity.