Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "access to to put my stuff" which is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific examples of resources you use.

Example: I often go to the library because it's peaceful and quiet, which helps me concentrate on studying. Moreover, it offers a wide range of resources like textbooks and online journals that I use to improve my knowledge.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating 'books' and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of what you discuss with friends. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'as quiet'.

Example: In the library, I usually read both digital and physical books because they offer diverse information. Additionally, I sometimes discuss study topics with my friends there since it's a quiet environment conducive to focused conversations.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured and detailed. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify what 'other option' means. Also, correct grammar errors like 'other option' should be 'other options'.

Example: I didn't go to the library much as a child because there were fewer libraries in my hometown. However, I developed a habit of reading by finding other options, such as borrowing books from friends or reading at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and includes filler words like 'umm'. Try to be more confident and specific. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid hesitation. Provide examples or reasons to support your view.

Example: I believe Chinese kids visit libraries less frequently nowadays because technology allows them to access information easily through the Internet and tablets. Therefore, many prefer studying online rather than going to a physical library.

× I often go to the library as it is really peaceful and quiet, so I can concentrate on my study and pass with flying colors.

✓ I often go to the library as it is really peaceful and quiet, so I can concentrate on my studies and pass with flying colors.

The word 'study' should be pluralized to 'studies' because it refers to multiple subjects or areas of learning, not a single study. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Additionally, the library also has a lot of resources which I can access to to put my stuff.

✓ Additionally, the library also has a lot of resources which I can access to put my stuff.

The phrase 'access to' is incorrect here; 'access' is a verb and does not require the preposition 'to' after it. The correct form is 'access resources' without 'to'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× In the library I also like to discuss some issues with my friends as quiet.

✓ In the library I also like to discuss some issues with my friends quietly.

The word 'quiet' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to describe how the discussion happens. The correct adverb form is 'quietly'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13).

× But then I developed a habit, so I tried to find other option.

✓ But then I developed a habit, so I tried to find other options.

The word 'option' should be pluralized to 'options' because it refers to multiple possible choices. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× With the technology nowadays, I think people don't really go to the library that much as before because they can access it easily.

✓ With technology nowadays, I think people don't really go to the library as much as before because they can access it easily.

The phrase 'With the technology' is incorrect because 'technology' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. Also, 'that much as before' should be 'as much as before' for correct comparison. This involves article errors (ID 22) and incorrect comparison object (ID 19).