Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'well' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'didn't have any much pressure' to 'don't have much pressure' and 'oftenly' to 'often'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'. Keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Example: I often go to the library nowadays because I don't have much pressure from my studies. As a book lover, I usually read comic books there. I find them entertaining and relaxing, which helps me enjoy my free time.

Suggestion: Avoid filler phrases like 'frankly speaking that' which are unnecessary. Use correct verb forms and articles, for example, 'read some articles' and 'some kinds of historical books'. Use linking words such as 'and' or 'also' to connect your ideas. Be more specific about what you do and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: In the library, I usually read articles and historical books. Recently, I have been interested in action books as well. I enjoy learning new things and exploring different genres.

Suggestion: Improve grammar by saying 'I didn't go to the library when I was younger because I had pressure from my studies'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'go through the library of Hindi'; instead, say 'I visit the Hindi library now'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas clearly. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I had a lot of pressure from my studies. Now, I have more free time, so I often visit the Hindi section of the library.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Use correct tense and grammar, for example, 'they have a lot of pressure from study' and 'they find related articles or books in the library'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Try to complete your sentences fully and keep answers concise.

Example: I am not sure about statistics, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they have a lot of pressure from their studies. They use the library to find related books and articles to help them learn better.

× Well, to be honest, uh, nowadays I go to library, uh, because I didn't have any much pressure on my study and I as I am a book lover, uh, so oftenly I go to the library and read some, uh, comic types of books. Mostly I prefer comic type book books.

✓ Well, to be honest, uh, nowadays I go to the library, uh, because I didn't have much pressure on my study and as I am a book lover, uh, so often I go to the library and read some, uh, comic types of books. Mostly I prefer comic type books.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because 'library' is a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'any much' is incorrect; it should be 'much' without 'any' in negative sentences. The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct form is 'often'. The phrase 'comic type book books' is redundant; 'comic type books' suffices.

× Frankly speaking that I do a lot of things in library like read some article and reading some kind of historical books as well.

✓ Frankly speaking, I do a lot of things in the library like reading some articles and reading some kinds of historical books as well.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate activities, so 'read' should be 'reading'. Also, 'article' should be plural 'articles' to match the context. 'Some kind of historical books' should be 'some kinds of historical books' to agree in number. The article 'the' is needed before 'library' as it refers to a specific place.

× No, usually I didn't go to a library when I was younger because I had a pressure on study so that I didn't get much time to go to the library and nowadays I am quite free that's why I go through the library of Hindi.

✓ No, usually I didn't go to the library when I was younger because I had pressure on my studies so I didn't get much time to go to the library and nowadays I am quite free; that's why I go to the Hindi library.

The phrase 'a library' should be 'the library' when referring to a specific library. 'A pressure' is incorrect; 'pressure' is uncountable and should be used without 'a'. 'Pressure on study' should be 'pressure on my studies' to be grammatically correct. 'Go through the library of Hindi' is awkward; 'go to the Hindi library' is the correct expression.

× Statistically speaking, that I do not know about Chinese kids, but I think, uh, today's kids mostly often go through the library because they had a lot of pressure on study and, uh, they, they found their, uh, related articles or books in the library.

✓ Statistically speaking, I do not know about Chinese kids, but I think, uh, today's kids mostly often go to the library because they have a lot of pressure on their studies and, uh, they find their related articles or books in the library.

The phrase 'go through the library' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to the library'. The tense 'had' should be present tense 'have' to match 'today's kids'. 'Pressure on study' should be 'pressure on their studies'. 'Found' should be 'find' to maintain present tense consistency.