Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, 'visit to the library' should be 'visit the library', and '100 of books' should be '100 books'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' more smoothly and avoid repeating the same idea twice. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: No, I don't often visit the library because I prefer reading e-books, which are much more convenient. For instance, I can carry hundreds of books on my mobile phone, allowing me to read anytime and anywhere without needing to go to the library physically.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, say 'go to the library' instead of 'go library', and 'in a quiet environment' instead of 'in quiet environment'. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'That's what people do there, right?' which may sound informal or uncertain. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: As I mentioned earlier, I don't often visit the library, but if I get a chance to go to the library, I would definitely read there because of the quiet environment, which helps me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Your answer is good and relevant, but some phrases can be improved for naturalness. For example, say 'both in elementary and secondary school' instead of 'in my both elementary and secondary school'. Also, 'once a week' is more natural than 'once in a week'. Try to use linking words like 'during which' correctly and avoid redundancy like 'in those days only'.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid, both in elementary and secondary school. We had a library period once a week, during which I enjoyed reading different books and developed my reading habit.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat incomplete and has grammatical errors. For example, say 'visit the library' instead of 'visit to library'. Also, the last sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words like 'however' properly. Avoid vague phrases and be more specific where possible.

Example: Honestly, I'm not sure if Chinese children often go to the library since I am from India. However, in my country, children usually visit the library regularly, and schools provide a library period to help them develop good reading habits.

× No, I don't often visit to the library because I prefer reading e-books which are much more convenient.

✓ No, I don't often visit the library because I prefer reading e-books which are much more convenient.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. The correct phrase is 'visit the library', not 'visit to the library'. This is a common preposition error.

× For example, I can carry 100 of books on my mobile phone which allow me to read anytime and anywhere instead of going to library physically.

✓ For example, I can carry 100 books on my mobile phone which allows me to read anytime and anywhere instead of going to the library physically.

The phrase '100 of books' is incorrect; it should be '100 books' without 'of'. Also, 'which allow me' should be 'which allows me' because 'which' refers to 'mobile phone' (singular). Additionally, 'going to library' should be 'going to the library' because 'library' is a singular countable noun requiring an article.

× Well, as I told you earlier, I don't often visit the library, but if I've got a chance to go library, I would definitely read there in quiet environment.

✓ Well, as I told you earlier, I don't often visit the library, but if I've got a chance to go to the library, I would definitely read there in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'in quiet environment' needs an article 'a' before 'quiet environment'.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid in my both elementary and secondary school.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid in both my elementary and secondary schools.

The phrase 'in my both elementary and secondary school' is incorrect. The correct order is 'both my elementary and secondary schools' because 'both' should come before the possessive pronoun 'my', and 'schools' should be plural as it refers to two different schools.

× Honestly, I'm not sure if Chinese people visit to library or not as I am from India.

✓ Honestly, I'm not sure if Chinese people visit the library or not as I am from India.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. The correct phrase is 'visit the library', not 'visit to library'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× However, in my country children usually visit the library regularly and schools also offer them library period so that children can develop good reading habits and.

✓ However, in my country, children usually visit the library regularly and schools also offer them library periods so that children can develop good reading habits.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete. Also, 'library period' should be plural 'library periods' to match the context. Adding a comma after 'country' improves readability.