Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "at you" and "non fictional books." Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Example: I don't go to the library very often nowadays. However, when I was in school, we had a mandatory library period where our teacher took us to read books of our choice. I usually preferred nonfiction books during that time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating information already mentioned. Also, use clearer linking words to connect your ideas. For example, instead of "I just told you," say "As I mentioned earlier."

Example: As I mentioned earlier, I don't visit the library often. But if I do, I would probably read books about gardening because I'm interested in learning how to grow uncommon plants like tulips or sunflowers.

Suggestion: Your answer is detailed and mostly clear, but there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "nonfictional book" and "I loved her." Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid ambiguous pronouns. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library every Monday during my childhood because we had a mandatory library period at school. Our teacher would bring us there and give us books based on our interests. I usually chose nonfiction books. She also encouraged us to read picture dictionaries, which made the experience very engaging and enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks confidence. Avoid vague statements and unsupported assumptions. Instead, try to give a more general and confident answer, or explain that you don't have enough information. Also, avoid redundant phrases and improve sentence structure.

Example: I'm not very familiar with the habits of Chinese children, but generally, many children in Asia enjoy reading and often visit libraries to study or read books.

× I remember going to the libraries back in 2010 when I was in school at you.

✓ I remember going to the library back in 2010 when I was in school at you.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' because it refers to a specific place the student attended, not multiple libraries. Using singular form is appropriate here.

× I would usually go for non fictional books.

✓ I would usually go for nonfiction books.

The term 'non fictional' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'nonfiction' as one word to describe books that are factual.

× I would just read a book which would be about plans.

✓ I would just read a book which would be about plants.

The word 'plans' is a typo or incorrect word here; the intended word is 'plants' which fits the context of gardening.

× I would love to see how to grow plants which we usually do not find, like tulips or perhaps sunflower.

✓ I would love to see how to grow plants which we usually do not find, like tulips or perhaps sunflowers.

The word 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to match the plural 'tulips' and the context of multiple types of plants.

× I would most likely go for nonfictional book in some of the classes.

✓ I would most likely go for nonfiction books in some of the classes.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books in classes, and 'nonfictional' is incorrect; 'nonfiction' is the correct adjective.

× I would most likely go for nonfictional book in some of the classes.

✓ I would most likely go for nonfiction books in some of the classes.

The adjective 'nonfictional' is incorrect; the correct term is 'nonfiction' to describe factual books.

× My teacher would come and she would take us to the library where often where she used to give us books based on our interest and I would most likely go for nonfictional book in some of the classes.

✓ My teacher would come and take us to the library where she often gave us books based on our interests, and I would most likely go for nonfiction books in some of the classes.

The sentence has redundant 'where often where' and awkward structure. Correcting to 'where she often gave us books based on our interests' improves clarity and grammar.

× I feel that's very subjective because I'm not a Chinese or I've never been friends with someone who belongs to that region so.

✓ I feel that's very subjective because I'm not Chinese, nor have I ever been friends with someone who belongs to that region.

The phrase 'I'm not a Chinese' is incorrect; 'Chinese' is a nationality adjective and does not take an article. Also, the conjunction 'or' is better replaced with 'nor' for negative statements. The sentence is restructured for clarity.