Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your answer more natural by avoiding repeated words and using correct tense. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually prefer other ways to learn, like watching videos or using the internet.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and use correct prepositions.

Example: I don't visit the library often, but when I was at university, I usually went there to study and read my textbooks.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing cricket in the street most of the time.

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but has grammatical errors and unclear sentences. Try to organize your answer logically using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid unnecessary repetition and be specific.

Example: I am not Chinese, so I don't know about Chinese kids. However, in Bangladesh, libraries are rare, and although schools and colleges have libraries, most kids do not visit them often.

× I didn't often go to the library at all.

✓ I didn't often go to the library at all.

No correction needed for singular/plural in this sentence.

× As I'm not going in life very very often, so this question is quite unfamiliar, but if sometimes I go in library, when I was in in my university I was there in library, so I often use my regular textbook and I read those things.

✓ As I don't go to the library very often, this question is quite unfamiliar, but sometimes when I went to the library at my university, I often used my regular textbooks and read those materials.

The original sentence has plural issues with 'library' (should be 'the library') and 'textbook' (should be plural 'textbooks'). Also, verb tenses and prepositions needed correction for clarity.

× No, not at all. I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. I basically like to have playing cricket in the street, so most of the time I'm playing cricket in the street.

✓ No, not at all. I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. I basically liked playing cricket in the street, so most of the time I played cricket in the street.

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'have playing' is incorrect; it should be 'liked playing'. The present continuous 'I'm playing' should be past tense 'I played' to maintain consistency.

× Though I'm not a Chinese kid, I'm a Bangladeshi so I didn't have any idea. But here in Bangladesh there are very few library in our country so it's quite tough to find libraries. But yes any schools and colleges there is library. Some people are went there and most of the kids they are not.

✓ Though I'm not a Chinese kid, I'm Bangladeshi so I don't have any idea. But here in Bangladesh there are very few libraries in our country so it's quite tough to find libraries. But yes, in any school or college there is a library. Some people go there and most of the kids do not.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' when referring to 'very few'. 'Schools and colleges' is plural, so 'there is library' should be 'there is a library' or 'there are libraries'. 'Some people are went' is incorrect; correct is 'Some people go'. 'Most of the kids they are not' is incorrect; correct is 'most of the kids do not'.