Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'go to the library' multiple times. Also, use plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I often visit the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate. There, I usually read books and write papers or articles.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks a clear topic sentence and is somewhat repetitive. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Also, use correct grammar and plural forms.

Example: I usually study in the library because my homework is challenging. Moreover, I use the library's resources to research and read books that help me complete my assignments.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use past tense consistently and provide clearer reasons with linking words.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my studies were not difficult or busy. Therefore, I could understand my topics without extra help.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and some unclear phrases. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and use clear, correct vocabulary. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to explain your opinion.

Example: In my opinion, Chinese children often visit the library because they have a lot of homework. Since their assignments can be difficult, the library provides a quiet place to complete their work efficiently.

× I can go to the library to read book and write paper and article.

✓ I can go to the library to read books and write papers and articles.

The nouns 'book', 'paper', and 'article' are countable and should be in plural form when referring to them generally. Using plural forms 'books', 'papers', and 'articles' is grammatically correct here.

× Yes, I usually do in the library because my homework is so hard and difficult.

✓ Yes, I usually study in the library because my homework is so hard and difficult.

The verb 'do' is incomplete without an object or complement. Replacing 'do' with 'study' clarifies the action and corrects the sentence structure.

× So I usually do in the library because I need to research for the resource and to read book.

✓ So I usually study in the library because I need to research resources and read books.

'Resource' and 'book' are countable nouns and should be pluralized to 'resources' and 'books' when referring to them generally. Also, 'research' is used without 'for' in this context.

× when I was a kid the study it is not busy and hard, so I don't need to go to library.

✓ when I was a kid, studying was not busy and hard, so I didn't need to go to the library.

The noun 'study' should be changed to the gerund 'studying' to function as the subject. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'didn't need'. The article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× so I don't need to go to library.

✓ so I don't need to go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is too hard, so it need it need to umm, go to the library to competition their work.

✓ It is too hard, so they need to go to the library to complete their work.

The modal verb 'need' requires the subject 'they' for agreement. 'Competition' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'complete' to express finishing work.