Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "often" and "frequently" together. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I often visit the library in my free time because I love reading a variety of books.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas with words like "so" or "but" for coherence.

Example: It depends on the situation; when I have free time, I usually read stories or thrillers, but before exams, I focus on academic books.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and structure. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words like "because" and "so" properly to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I loved reading. My school had a library where I borrowed books and spent my free time.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but can be improved by avoiding informal phrases like "like you do Facebook" and by using clearer linking words. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

Example: I am not sure, but based on what I have seen on social media, Chinese kids seem very studious, so they probably visit the library when they have time or permission from their parents.

× It actually depend on the situation I am in.

✓ It actually depends on the situation I am in.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× Whenever I get free times I usually read books like stories, thrillers or whenever I have exam I usually read academic books there.

✓ Whenever I get free time I usually read books like stories, thrillers or whenever I have an exam I usually read academic books there.

The word 'times' should be singular 'time' because 'free time' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'exam' needs an article 'an' before it because it is a singular countable noun. These corrections follow the rules of countable and uncountable nouns and article usage.

× Yes, in my childhood I often go to the library because from my childhood I love reading.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I often went to the library because from my childhood I loved reading.

Since the sentence refers to past time 'in my childhood', the verbs 'go' and 'love' should be in the past tense 'went' and 'loved' respectively to maintain tense consistency.

× So in my school there was a library and I keep borrowing books from there and I spent my free time there during classes.

✓ So in my school there was a library and I kept borrowing books from there and I spent my free time there during classes.

The verb 'keep' should be in the past tense 'kept' to match the past tense context of the sentence. This maintains tense consistency throughout the sentence.