Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use simpler sentence structures and avoid repetition. For example, say "I go to the library once a week because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my studies. It also has many books by different authors."

Example: I usually go to the library once a week because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate on my studies. Also, the library has a wide range of books from various authors, which is very helpful.

Suggestion: Focus on using correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary details and be concise. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "First, I find a comfortable spot where I can concentrate. Then, I look for books that are useful for my studies."

Example: When I go to the library, I first find a comfortable place where I can focus. After that, I search for books related to my study topics and choose the ones that help me the most.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and correct grammar. Explain your memories with more details and use linking words. For example, "When I was five, my dad took me to the library and explained the rules, like keeping quiet. I also learned about different sections and enjoyed beautiful stories there."

Example: When I was five years old, my father took me to the library. He showed me the place and explained the rules, such as keeping quiet. I also learned about the different sections and enjoyed reading beautiful stories.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and clearly. If you don't know, say so briefly and then give your opinion about your own country. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I am not sure about Chinese kids, but in Sri Lanka, some children find the library boring and do not go often."

Example: I don't know much about whether Chinese kids go to the library. However, in Sri Lanka, many children find the library boring, so only a few of them visit it regularly.

× Actually I I go to the library in once a week because it's make me very quiet place to focus my studies and it has variable resources like books and various of the authors and.

✓ Actually I go to the library once a week because it's a very quiet place to focus on my studies and it has various resources like books by various authors.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'in once a week' which should be 'once a week', 'it's make me' should be 'it's a', and 'variable resources' should be 'various resources'. Also, 'various of the authors' is incorrect; it should be 'various authors'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I went to this library, first of all I'll choose this place which is most comfortable and concentration for my focus on the studies.

✓ When I went to this library, first of all I chose the place which was most comfortable and helped me concentrate on my studies.

The sentence mixes past and future tenses incorrectly. 'I'll choose' is future tense but the context is past, so it should be 'I chose'. Also, 'most comfortable and concentration' is incorrect; it should be 'most comfortable and helped me concentrate'. This aligns the sentence with past tense and corrects word usage.

× Then I went to the books big bookstore and I say Sullivan's book for the for the study material for my purpose and select the book for.

✓ Then I went to the big bookstore and I saw Sullivan's book as study material for my purpose and selected the book.

The verbs 'say' and 'select' are incorrectly used in present tense; they should be past tense 'saw' and 'selected' to match the past context. Also, 'books big bookstore' is incorrect word order; it should be 'big bookstore'. These corrections fix tense consistency and word order.

× I remember that when I was age of five, my dad invited me to go to the library and he show me this is the library and this was this regulation.

✓ I remember that when I was five years old, my dad invited me to go to the library and he showed me this is the library and explained the regulations.

The phrase 'was age of five' is incorrect; it should be 'was five years old'. The verb 'show' should be past tense 'showed' to match the past context. Also, 'this was this regulation' is unclear and corrected to 'explained the regulations' for clarity.

× We have to keep quiet here and the sections. Why sections and this beautiful story.

✓ We have to keep quiet here in the sections. The sections have beautiful stories.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Why sections and this beautiful story' is not a proper sentence. The correction clarifies the meaning by connecting ideas properly and using correct pronouns and sentence structure.

× Actually I don't know about this Chinese food because I live in Sri Lanka.

✓ Actually, I don't know about Chinese kids because I live in Sri Lanka.

The original sentence says 'Chinese food' which is unrelated to the question about Chinese kids going to the library. The correction changes 'food' to 'kids' to match the context. This fixes the incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.

× But in case of Sri Lanka, there are some kids only like to go library because it's they feel it's very boring.

✓ But in the case of Sri Lanka, only some kids like to go to the library because they feel it's very boring.

The phrase 'there are some kids only like to go library' is incorrect. It should be 'only some kids like to go to the library'. Also, 'it's they feel' is incorrect and corrected to 'they feel'. These corrections fix quantifier placement and pronoun usage.