Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use simple and direct language to express your ideas effectively. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Actually, I don't visit the library often because I prefer reading e-books and online articles. I find them more convenient and time-saving since I can access them anytime and anywhere.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your activities in the library.

Example: I usually search for medical research articles in the library. For example, in my last research, I looked for information about HPV. It was easy to use the online database because I could search using keywords.

Suggestion: Make your answer more grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons for your answer.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing outside and doing other activities. Also, my family had a good collection of books at home, so I could read there.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons or examples.

Example: Actually, I don't have much information about Chinese children, but I think not all of them go to traditional libraries. With the rise of digital technology, many prefer using online databases for studying and gathering information.

× Actually, I really visit the library.

✓ Actually, I don't really visit the library.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present simple tense. To express that the student does not often visit the library, 'don't' is needed before the verb 'visit'.

× I prefer reading epochs and online articles.

✓ I prefer reading e-books and online articles.

The word 'epochs' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'e-books', which are electronic books. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but correcting it improves clarity.

× I find it convenient and saves a lot of time of a lot of time to me.

✓ I find it convenient and it saves me a lot of time.

The original sentence is repetitive and incorrectly structured. The subject 'it' must be repeated for the second verb 'saves', and 'to me' should be 'me' as the indirect object. The phrase 'of a lot of time' is redundant.

× And I can also I can in addition I can say.

✓ And I can also say that.

The original sentence is repetitive and incomplete. Simplifying to 'And I can also say that' makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× I usually enjoy searching for medical research articles and stuff related to the medical.

✓ I usually enjoy searching for medical research articles and stuff related to medicine.

The phrase 'related to the medical' is incorrect; 'medicine' is the correct noun to use here without the article 'the'.

× For example, in my last research I searching for the HPV.

✓ For example, in my last research I searched for HPV.

The verb 'searching' is incorrectly used in present participle form; past simple 'searched' is required to match the past time reference 'last research'. Also, 'the HPV' should be 'HPV' without 'the'.

× It was very easy to use the online because I can search with the keywords not not to for the all of.

✓ It was very easy to use online because I can search with keywords, not for all of them.

The phrase 'use the online' is incorrect; 'use online' is correct. The phrase 'search with the keywords not not to for the all of' is confusing and ungrammatical; corrected to 'search with keywords, not for all of them' for clarity.

× No, I wasn't go to the library as a child because I prefer playing outside or engaging in other or engaged in other activities.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing outside or engaging in other activities.

The phrase 'I wasn't go' is incorrect; past simple 'I didn't go' is required. Also, 'I prefer' should be past tense 'I preferred' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'or engaged in other activities' is redundant and removed.

× In addition, my family had a good collection of books that I can use it in reading and there also I.

✓ In addition, my family had a good collection of books that I could use for reading, and they were also there.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'books' and should be removed. 'Can' should be past tense 'could' to match past context. The phrase 'and there also I' is incomplete and corrected to 'and they were also there' for clarity.

× Actually, I don't have enough information about the Chinese children, but I think not all of them going to the traditional, traditional library.

✓ Actually, I don't have enough information about Chinese children, but I think not all of them go to the traditional library.

The phrase 'not all of them going' is incorrect; present simple 'not all of them go' is required. The repeated word 'traditional' is reduced to one.

× With this rising of the technology of the digital technology, a lot of them using the online information and database for searching, studying and also for gathering information.

✓ With the rise of digital technology, many of them use online information and databases for searching, studying, and gathering information.

The phrase 'With this rising of the technology of the digital technology' is awkward; corrected to 'With the rise of digital technology'. 'A lot of them using' is incorrect; present simple 'many of them use' is correct. 'Database' should be plural 'databases' to match 'information'.