Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có phần không tự nhiên khi dùng từ "gossip" trong ngữ cảnh thư viện. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, tập trung vào hoạt động chính và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library about twice a week with my family and friends to find interesting books and enjoy reading.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "focusly" không đúng, và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh nói chuyện trong thư viện vì đó là nơi yên tĩnh.

Example: The library is a quiet place where I can fully concentrate on reading books and doing my homework. I usually spend my time studying there.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ và cấu trúc câu cho đúng, ví dụ "I'm go" nên là "I went". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "variety of type of books".

Example: Yes, I was passionate about reading when I was a child, so I often went to the library to explore different kinds of books.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ "Chinese kid is often go" nên là "Chinese kids often go". Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.

Example: As far as I know, Chinese children often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and parents encourage their kids to study hard.

× Library is a quiet place who we can focusly 100% in reading book and doing our homework.

✓ The library is a quiet place where we can focus 100% on reading books and doing our homework.

The pronoun 'who' is incorrectly used to refer to 'place'; 'where' should be used instead. Also, 'focusly' is not a word; the correct form is 'focus'. Additionally, 'reading book' should be pluralized to 'reading books' and 'in' should be replaced with 'on' after 'focus'.

× So in the library I often read books, doing my homework and chat with my friends and family.

✓ So in the library I often read books, do my homework and chat with my friends and family.

After 'I often', verbs should be in base form, not '-ing' form. 'Doing' should be 'do' to maintain parallel structure with 'read' and 'chat'.

× Yes, I am a person who is passionate about reading books. So when I was a kid I'm go to the library quite often to read my books and also it's help me to explore the variety of type of books, you know.

✓ Yes, I am a person who is passionate about reading books. So when I was a kid I went to the library quite often to read my books and also it helped me to explore a variety of types of books, you know.

The phrase 'I'm go' is incorrect; past tense 'I went' should be used to match 'when I was a kid'. 'It's help' should be 'it helped' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'a variety of type of books' should be corrected to 'a variety of types of books'.

× As a Vietnamese person and as far as I know, I'm, I think that Chinese kid is often go to a library because China is a country which is focused in concentrating education.

✓ As a Vietnamese person and as far as I know, I think that Chinese kids often go to the library because China is a country which focuses on education.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match 'often go'. 'Is often go' is incorrect; it should be 'often go'. 'A library' should be 'the library' to refer to libraries in general. 'Focused in concentrating education' is awkward; 'focuses on education' is correct.