Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add a supporting detail. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your situation briefly.

Example: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one in my city. However, if there was, I would visit it about once a week to read and study.

Suggestion: Your answer does not directly address the question and contains a spelling mistake ('liability' instead of 'library'). Try to answer the question hypothetically if the library existed, and explain what activities you would do there.

Example: If I went to the library, I would usually read books, study quietly, and sometimes use the computer for research.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use correct tense and structure, and provide a clearer response with some supporting detail.

Example: I don't clearly remember going to the library when I was a kid, but I think I visited it a few times with my parents.

Suggestion: Avoid saying you are unfamiliar with the topic. Instead, give a confident opinion with reasons or examples to support your answer.

Example: Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them with their studies and provides a quiet place to read.

× Unfortunately there is no library in my city and for the purpose of answering the question if there is a library in my city, I would definitely go to the library, I think once every week.

✓ Unfortunately, there is no library in my city, but for the purpose of answering the question, if there were a library in my city, I would definitely go to the library, I think once every week.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there is' when referring to a hypothetical situation. When talking about an unreal or hypothetical condition, the subjunctive mood 'if there were' should be used instead of 'if there is'. This is a common error in 'there be' constructions when expressing hypothetical scenarios.

× As said earlier, there's no liability in the city, so why do not go to the library?

✓ As said earlier, there's no library in the city, so why don't I go to the library?

The original sentence has a typo 'liability' instead of 'library' and an incorrect pronoun usage 'why do not go' which lacks a subject. The correct form is 'why don't I go' to include the subject 'I' and the contraction 'don't' for 'do not'. This corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× I hardly remember if I ever gone to the library.

✓ I hardly remember if I ever went to the library.

The verb 'gone' is the past participle and should not be used alone without an auxiliary verb. Since the sentence is in simple past tense, the correct past tense form 'went' should be used. This corrects the past tense verb usage.