Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. 'We advisors there' no imi ga fumei de, bunpou mo machigatte imasu. Motto seikaku ni, shizen ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I often go to the library because I am a college student and need to research for my assignments. I also discuss topics with my advisors there to support my studies.' to iu fuu ni.

Example: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a college student and need to research for my assignments. I also discuss topics with my advisors there to support my studies.

Suggestion: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'go to bed with my friends' wa machigai desu. Motto seikaku ni, shizen ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I usually do research for my assignments and reports. Sometimes, I study with my friends and do homework together.' to iu fuu ni.

Example: I usually do research for my assignments and reports. Sometimes, I study with my friends and do homework together.

Suggestion: Bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa ni mondai ga arimasu. 'There is there is there is not a library' wa fukusuu no kurikaeshi de, imi ga tsutawari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, shizen ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'When I was a kid, I did not go to the library often because I lived in a rural area where there was no library.' to iu fuu ni.

Example: When I was a kid, I did not go to the library often because I lived in a rural area where there was no library.

Suggestion: Kotae ga fumei de, shitsumon ni kotaete imasen. Motto seikaku ni, shizen ni kotaeru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think many Chinese kids go to the library to study, but it depends on where they live.' to iu fuu ni.

Example: I think many Chinese kids go to the library to study, but it depends on where they live.

× So we advisors there to discuss many topics before to support my studies.

✓ So we are advising there to discuss many topics to support my studies.

The original sentence lacks the correct form of the verb 'to be' before the present participle 'advisors'. The correct form is 'are advising' to indicate the ongoing action. Also, 'before to support' is incorrect; it should be 'to support'.

× While actually speaking, as I mentioned, often go to library.

✓ Actually, as I mentioned, I often go to the library.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subject. The corrected sentence places the adverb 'actually' and phrase 'as I mentioned' properly and includes the subject 'I' for clarity.

× While actually speaking, as I mentioned, often go to library.

✓ Actually, as I mentioned, I often go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× sometimes I go to bed with my friends and do our homework.

✓ sometimes I go to the library with my friends and do our homework.

The phrase 'go to bed with my friends' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'go to the library with my friends'. 'Go to bed' means to sleep, which does not fit the context.

× Well, just speaking when I was a kid, I'm not going to library very frequently.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library very frequently.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm not going' with past time 'when I was a kid'. The correct modal verb usage for past habits is 'didn't go'.

× Well, just speaking when I was a kid, I'm not going to library very frequently.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library very frequently.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× This is because I'm living in the rural area and in my area there is there is there is not a library in there.

✓ This is because I lived in a rural area, and in my area, there was no library.

The sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect tense. 'I'm living' should be past tense 'I lived' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'there is there is there is not' is repetitive and incorrect. 'No library' is the correct negation.

× So I don't think I can control.

✓ So I don't think I had access to one.

The phrase 'I can control' is unclear and incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'I didn't have access to a library'.

× Should I have me on the fence about this about this problem in the past?

✓ I was on the fence about this problem in the past.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Should I have me'. The correct expression is 'I was on the fence', indicating indecision in the past.