Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I rarely go to the library because most information is available on the Internet. Moreover, going to the library takes a lot of time, so I prefer to study at home.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I usually do my homework and read books in the library. For example, I complete assignments on the computer because the library provides a quiet and comfortable environment.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because it requires a quiet environment, but my neighborhood was usually noisy, which made it difficult to concentrate.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều, số ít.

Example: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in urban areas where facilities are easily accessible. Libraries are valuable places for studying and gaining knowledge, and schools encourage students to use them for research and reading.

× I rarely go to the library because nowadays there are a lot of information on the Internet

✓ I rarely go to the library because nowadays there is a lot of information on the Internet

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should be used with singular verbs and quantifiers like 'a lot of' without plural form. Therefore, 'there are a lot of information' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a lot of information'.

× and I don't need to go to go outside

✓ and I don't need to go outside

The phrase 'to go to go outside' contains a repeated verb 'go'. The correct form is 'to go outside' without repetition.

× and it's really take me a lot of time to go to the library

✓ and it really takes me a lot of time to go to the library

The phrase 'it's really take me' is incorrect. The subject 'it' requires the verb 'takes' in third person singular form. Also, 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with 'it'.

× so I not often go

✓ so I do not often go

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present simple tense. The correct form is 'I do not often go'.

× Hi do my homework and read a book that I have enough by it before

✓ I do my homework and read books that I have borrowed before

The sentence has several errors: 'Hi' should be 'I'; 'have enough by it before' is unclear and likely a misuse of words. The intended meaning seems to be reading books previously borrowed. Correcting to 'read books that I have borrowed before' clarifies the meaning.

× For example I do my homework on the computer because the library is very very. Welcome.

✓ For example, I do my homework on the computer because the library is very quiet and welcoming.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'very very. Welcome.' which is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'very quiet and welcoming' to describe the library appropriately.

× the library requires a quiet environment and almost the choice as very noisy and that may make some people feel angry and young

✓ the library requires a quiet environment, but almost all the choices are very noisy, which may make some people feel angry and uncomfortable

The sentence incorrectly uses 'and' where 'but' is appropriate to contrast ideas. Also, 'almost the choice as very noisy' is unclear and corrected to 'almost all the choices are very noisy'. 'Young' is likely a misuse and replaced with 'uncomfortable' to fit context.

× So I don't know like that

✓ So I don't like that

The phrase 'I don't know like that' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't like that'.

× where essential facility is as easy as Libraries are often seen as a valuable places for studying and expanding knowledge

✓ where essential facilities are easily accessible. Libraries are often seen as valuable places for studying and expanding knowledge

The phrase 'essential facility is as easy as' is incorrect; it should be plural 'facilities are easily accessible'. Also, 'a valuable places' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'places'; corrected to 'valuable places'.

× and school encourage students to use them for research and reading

✓ and schools encourage students to use them for research and reading

The noun 'school' should be plural 'schools' to agree with the plural verb 'encourage'.