Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to finish your thoughts fully and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain why electronic devices help you save time and how that affects your library visits.

Example: No, I don't go to the library as often as before because I usually read on my mobile phone or Kindle. Using these devices saves me time since I can read anywhere, so I rarely need to visit the library now.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and better grammar. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Also, avoid negative statements without explanation. Try to explain why the quiet environment affects your enjoyment.

Example: When I visit the library, I usually scan the shelves to find interesting books to read. However, I don't enjoy staying there for long because the quiet environment makes me feel uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Use correct tense and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear reason why you went to the library as a child, and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I used to go to the library as a kid because we had school projects that required research. Therefore, the library was a useful place to find information for our assignments.

Suggestion: Avoid making generalizations or assumptions about people. Instead, express your opinion politely and support it with reasons. Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

Example: I'm not sure about all Chinese children, but I believe many of them visit libraries often to study and do research because education is highly valued in China.

× No, I don't go to the library as frequently as before because I have a mobile phone or Kindle that I used to read. And also by using all those electronic devices, I can save time and I can.

✓ No, I don't go to the library as frequently as before because I have a mobile phone or Kindle that I use to read. Also, by using all those electronic devices, I can save time.

The phrase 'that I used to read' incorrectly uses the past tense 'used' instead of the present tense 'use' to describe a current habit. Also, the sentence 'and I can' is incomplete and unnecessary. The correct form is 'that I use to read' to indicate a present action. Additionally, 'And also by using' is redundant; 'Also, by using' is clearer.

× Before when I visit library I just scan books, look for an interesting books to enjoy, but I don't really enjoy library because of the quiet environment that library has.

✓ Before, when I visited the library, I just scanned books, looked for interesting books to enjoy, but I didn't really enjoy the library because of the quiet environment it has.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'an interesting books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural and 'an' is singular; it should be 'interesting books'. The verb tenses are adjusted to past tense to match 'Before' and the time frame. The phrase 'that library has' is better expressed as 'it has' to avoid repetition.

× Before when I visit library I just scan books, look for an interesting books to enjoy, but I don't really enjoy library because of the quiet environment that library has.

✓ Before, when I visited the library, I just scanned books, looked for interesting books to enjoy, but I didn't really enjoy the library because of the quiet environment it has.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense: 'visit' to 'visited', 'scan' to 'scanned', 'look' to 'looked', and 'don't enjoy' to 'didn't enjoy'. This maintains tense consistency.

× Before when I visit library I just scan books, look for an interesting books to enjoy, but I don't really enjoy library because of the quiet environment that library has.

✓ Before, when I visited the library, I just scanned books, looked for interesting books to enjoy, but I didn't really enjoy the library because of the quiet environment it has.

The phrase 'an interesting books' mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'books'. It should be 'interesting books' without 'an' to correctly match plural form.

× Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to a library because we have or we had a project that we need to finish by using our library, which is a project.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to the library because we had a project that we needed to finish by using the library.

The phrase 'a library' should be 'the library' because it refers to a specific library known to the speaker. Also, 'our library' is unclear; 'the library' is more appropriate. The verb tenses are adjusted to past tense for consistency. The phrase 'which is a project' is redundant and removed.

× Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to a library because we have or we had a project that we need to finish by using our library, which is a project.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to the library because we had a project that we needed to finish by using the library.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in past tense: 'have' to 'had' and 'need' to 'needed' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to a library because we have or we had a project that we need to finish by using our library, which is a project.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to the library because we had a project that we needed to finish by using the library.

The article 'a' before 'library' is incorrect because it refers to a specific library; 'the library' is correct. Also, 'our library' is ambiguous; 'the library' is clearer.

× Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to a library because we have or we had a project that we need to finish by using our library, which is a project.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a kid, we went to the library because we had a project that we needed to finish by using the library.

The pronoun 'our library' is unclear and unnecessary. Using 'the library' is more appropriate to refer to the place used for the project.

× I don't know anything about Chinese children, but I think yes, they go a lot to the library to research and to study because Chinese people are smart. So I think they're often visit the library.

✓ I don't know anything about Chinese children, but I think yes, they go to the library a lot to research and study because Chinese people are smart. So I think they often visit the library.

The phrase 'they go a lot to the library' is awkward; 'they go to the library a lot' is correct. Also, 'they're often visit' is incorrect; it should be 'they often visit' because 'they're' (they are) cannot be followed by the base verb 'visit' without '-ing'.

× I don't know anything about Chinese children, but I think yes, they go a lot to the library to research and to study because Chinese people are smart. So I think they're often visit the library.

✓ I don't know anything about Chinese children, but I think yes, they go to the library a lot to research and study because Chinese people are smart. So I think they often visit the library.

The contraction 'they're' (they are) is incorrectly used before 'visit'. The correct form is 'they often visit' without 'are' because 'visit' is a simple present verb here.