Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng nên tránh sử dụng từ lóng như 'cause' và nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm lý do cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I rarely go to the library because nowadays I prefer to search for information on the Internet, which is more convenient and faster.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'it's it's it's' và câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: In the library, I usually spend time doing my homework and researching topics for my classes because it is a quiet place specialized for studying.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lủng củng và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I don't remember going to the library when I was a kid because I usually stayed at home and played with toys my parents gave me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi thay vì nói không biết. Bạn có thể đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân hoặc dự đoán dựa trên kiến thức chung để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children in China probably go to the library to study and read books, just like in my country.

× I would say I rarely go to the library 'cause these days I usually search for such information on Internet instead.

✓ I would say I rarely go to the library 'cause these days I usually search for such information on the Internet instead.

The phrase 'on Internet' is incorrect because 'Internet' is a unique noun that requires the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'on the Internet'. This is an article error (ID 22).

× Obviously in a library I would spend time doing my homework and do some research for the topic in classes.

✓ Obviously, in the library I would spend time doing my homework and doing some research for the topics in classes.

When referring to a specific place like 'library' in a general sense, 'the library' is used instead of 'a library'. Also, 'do some research for the topic in classes' is better as 'doing some research for the topics in classes' to maintain parallel structure and plural form for 'topics'. This involves article error (ID 17) and singular/plural issue (ID 1).

× And I think it it's it's really specialized for that kind of purpose.

✓ And I think it is really specialized for that kind of purpose.

The phrase 'it it's it's' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'it is' or 'it's'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× As I remember them, I have never been to a library since I was a kid 'cause back then I didn't have much time with my parents and usually I stayed home and back those day.

✓ As I remember, I have never been to a library since I was a kid because back then I didn't have much time with my parents and usually I stayed home back in those days.

The phrase 'back those day' is incorrect; it should be 'back in those days' to correctly express past time. Also, 'As I remember them' is better as 'As I remember'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Back in those day, my parents would provide me some toys in order to play instead of.

✓ Back in those days, my parents would provide me with some toys to play with instead.

The phrase 'Back in those day' should be 'Back in those days' for plural form. Also, 'provide me some toys in order to play instead of' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'provide me with some toys to play with instead.' This involves singular/plural issue (ID 1) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I have no idea, 'cause I'm Vietnamese, I'm typically a Vietnamese, Vietnamese kid, and I would say I have no idea about this topic.

✓ I have no idea because I'm Vietnamese; I'm typically a Vietnamese kid, and I would say I have no idea about this topic.

The phrase 'I'm typically a Vietnamese, Vietnamese kid' is redundant and awkward. Removing the repeated 'Vietnamese' improves clarity. Also, replacing the contraction 'cause' with 'because' is more formal. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure error (ID 26).