Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I don't often go to the library nowadays, but when I was a child, I used to visit it regularly because I enjoyed reading books there, which helped me improve my practical skills.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrasing and be more specific about how the environment helps you.

Example: Usually, I read books on subjects like chemistry and science in the library because the soothing and calm environment helps me concentrate better on my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer has tense inconsistency and some grammatical errors. Make sure to use past tense when talking about the past. Also, try to provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

Example: To be honest, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was none near my hometown. Therefore, I usually preferred reading books at home with my mother.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use linking words properly and avoid redundancy. Also, be more specific and concise in your explanation.

Example: Libraries are common worldwide, and I believe every child should visit them. However, since China is a developed country, many Chinese kids prefer reading digital books rather than visiting libraries.

× I really prefer to go to library to read books and enhances my practical skills.

✓ I really prefer to go to the library to read books and enhance my practical skills.

The verb 'enhances' is incorrect here because after 'prefer to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the third person singular form. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. So, 'enhances' should be 'enhance' to match the structure and 'to library' should be 'to the library'.

× I really prefer to go to library to read books and enhances my practical skills.

✓ I really prefer to go to the library to read books and enhance my practical skills.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Hence, 'to library' should be corrected to 'to the library'. This is a common article usage error in English.

× When it in the soothing and calm environment, it makes me help to concentrate on the subject.

✓ When it is in the soothing and calm environment, it helps me to concentrate on the subject.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'When it'. Also, 'makes me help to concentrate' is awkward; the correct expression is 'helps me to concentrate'. The verb 'helps' fits better here to express assistance in concentrating.

× To be honest, I don't go to the library when I was a kid because it was not available near my hometown, so I usually prefer to read books at my home with my mother.

✓ To be honest, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because it was not available near my hometown, so I usually preferred to read books at my home with my mother.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't go' with past time 'when I was a kid'. The correct past tense form is 'didn't go'. Also, 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to maintain consistency with the past time frame.

× As libraries are very common in each part of the world so I think that every child should visit to the libraries.

✓ As libraries are very common in every part of the world, I think that every child should visit the libraries.

The preposition 'to' after 'visit' is unnecessary and incorrect. The verb 'visit' is directly followed by the object without 'to'. Also, 'each part' is better expressed as 'every part' in this context. The sentence also needs a comma before 'I think' to separate clauses.

× As libraries are very common in each part of the world so I think that every child should visit to the libraries.

✓ As libraries are very common in every part of the world, I think that every child should visit the libraries.

The phrase 'the libraries' is correct here because it refers to libraries in general as a known group. The article usage is appropriate, but the sentence structure needs correction as explained earlier.

× But according to me as China comes under the developed country so Chinese kids mainly prefer to read digital books as compared to the library.

✓ But according to me, as China is a developed country, Chinese kids mainly prefer to read digital books compared to the library.

The phrase 'comes under the developed country' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'is a developed country'. Also, 'as compared to' is better simplified to 'compared to'. Commas are added for clarity. The preposition 'to' after 'prefer' is not needed here.