Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'What?'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'pencil' nên là 'pencils' và 'student books' nên là 'study books'.

Example: I don't often go to the library because I'm not a big fan of books. However, I visit it occasionally to get essential study materials, such as pencils and textbooks, since it's convenient for me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp lại và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'comics book' nên là 'comic books' và 'pencil' nên là 'pencils'. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I used to go to the library often to buy comic books. However, now I mainly go there to purchase necessary study materials like pencils and textbooks. Sometimes, I also buy some entertainment items.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I always go' nên là 'I always went' và 'I can reading' nên là 'I could read'. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho câu chuyện về quá khứ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: When I was a kid, especially between 10 and 15 years old, I always went to the library because I could read comics and buy textbooks there. It was fun and convenient since my house was near the library.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sửa lỗi phát âm 'kiss' thành 'kid' và ngữ pháp như 'Chinese kid' thành 'Chinese kids'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: I'm Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids' habits. However, I think it depends on their interests. For example, Chinese kids who love studying and reading probably go to the library more often than those who don't.

× I don't often go to the library since I'm not a book lover.

✓ I don't often go to the library since I'm not a book lover.

No correction needed here as the quantifier 'often' is used correctly.

× I still go to the library whenever I need some necessary things for my study course, like pencil, textbook or student books, because it's convenient for me and it's essential.

✓ I still go to the library whenever I need some necessary things for my study course, like pencils, textbooks, or student books, because it's convenient for me and it's essential.

The nouns 'pencil' and 'textbook' should be pluralized to 'pencils' and 'textbooks' because they refer to multiple items. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I used to often go to the library to buy comics book however, and now I usually go to the library to buy necessary things for my study course like pencil, both textbooks or student books.

✓ I used to often go to the library to buy comic books; however, now I usually go to the library to buy necessary things for my study course like pencils, textbooks, or student books.

'Comics book' should be 'comic books' to correctly use the plural form. Also, 'pencil' should be plural 'pencils' to match the context. The word 'both' is unnecessary before 'textbooks' and should be removed. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I used to often go to the library to buy comics book however, and now I usually go to the library to buy necessary things for my study course like pencil, both textbooks or student books.

✓ I used to often go to the library to buy comic books; however, now I usually go to the library to buy necessary things for my study course like pencils, textbooks, or student books.

The conjunction 'however' should be preceded by a semicolon or period, not a comma, to correctly connect two independent clauses. This is an incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).

× Sometimes I can actually buy some entertainment stuff.

✓ Sometimes I can actually buy some entertainment items.

The word 'stuff' is informal and vague; 'items' is more appropriate in this context. This relates to incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× When I was a kid, especially around 10 to 15 years old, I always go to the library because I can reading comic and buy some textbook there.

✓ When I was a kid, especially around 10 to 15 years old, I always went to the library because I could read comics and buy some textbooks there.

The verbs 'go' and 'can reading' are incorrect in past tense context. 'Go' should be 'went' and 'can reading' should be 'could read'. Also, 'comic' should be plural 'comics' and 'textbook' should be plural 'textbooks'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I find it fun and convenient for me because my house is near the library.

✓ I find it fun and convenient for me because my house is near the library.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I'm a Vietnamese kiss so I have no idea if the Chinese kid often go to the library or not.

✓ I'm a Vietnamese kid so I have no idea if Chinese kids often go to the library or not.

'Kiss' is a typo and should be 'kid'. Also, 'the Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the general statement. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I'm a Vietnamese kiss so I have no idea if the Chinese kid often go to the library or not.

✓ I'm a Vietnamese kid so I have no idea if Chinese kids often go to the library or not.

The verb 'go' should be 'go' for plural subject 'Chinese kids'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× However, I think it depends on their hobbies.

✓ However, I think it depends on their hobbies.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× For example, a Chinese kid who loves studying and reading will go to the library more often than a kid who is not.

✓ For example, a Chinese kid who loves studying and reading will go to the library more often than a kid who does not.

The phrase 'a kid who is not' is incomplete and should be 'a kid who does not' to correctly negate the verb. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).