Library— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thói quen hiện tại và kế hoạch tương lai một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

Example: I don't often go to the library now because I am busy with work. However, I hope to visit the library more often in the future to enjoy reading.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng câu rời rạc và nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho thói quen trong quá khứ.

Example: When I was at university, I usually went to the library to find books by my favorite author, Dan Brown, because I enjoyed reading his thrilling stories.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho các hành động trong quá khứ và tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a kid because I didn't like reading. However, when I was about 14, I started visiting the library more often after my teacher recommended some books.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ không chính xác. Bạn nên dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen hiện tại và tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I think Chinese kids go to libraries more often nowadays than in the past because people understand the importance of reading, so parents and teachers encourage them to read more.

× Since I finished university I have never had a chance to go to the library anymore.

✓ Since I finished university I have never had a chance to go to the library.

The word 'anymore' is incorrectly used in a positive sentence. 'Anymore' is typically used in negative sentences or questions to indicate 'any longer'. Removing 'anymore' corrects the sentence.

× It's not now, I'm quite busy with making a living, so in the future I wish I I can go to the library to.

✓ It's not now, I'm quite busy making a living, so in the future I wish I could go to the library too.

The phrase 'I wish I I can' is incorrect; 'wish' is followed by a past modal verb to express a desire about the future, so 'could' is appropriate. Also, 'to' at the end is unnecessary and 'too' is the correct word to express 'also'.

× When I was in the library of the university, I often looked for the book from a certain author.

✓ When I was in the university library, I often looked for books by a certain author.

The phrase 'the library of the university' is awkward; 'university library' is more natural. Also, 'the book' should be plural 'books' because the student likely searched for multiple books. 'From a certain author' should be 'by a certain author' to indicate authorship.

× Like my favorite author is Dan Brown, so I would like to find his books to read.

✓ My favorite author is Dan Brown, so I would like to find his books to read.

Starting a sentence with 'Like' in this context is incorrect; it should be omitted. The sentence flows better without it.

× I think no, because I don't really like to read books when I was a kid.

✓ I think no, because I didn't really like to read books when I was a kid.

The verb tense is inconsistent; 'don't' is present tense but the time frame is past ('when I was a kid'). It should be 'didn't' to match the past time frame.

× Umm until I'm around 14 or above.

✓ Umm until I was around 14 or older.

The phrase refers to a past time, so 'I'm' (present tense) should be 'I was' (past tense). Also, 'or above' is better expressed as 'or older' when referring to age.

× I start to go to the library more often because my teacher recommended me to read my book.

✓ I started to go to the library more often because my teacher recommended that I read books.

The verb 'start' should be in past tense 'started' to match the past context. 'Recommended me to read my book' is incorrect; it should be 'recommended that I read books' for proper grammar and meaning.

× Yeah, I think Chinese kids nowadays would like to go to the libraries, umm, rather than in the past, because now people know the importance of reading books.

✓ Yeah, I think Chinese kids nowadays like to go to libraries more than in the past, because now people know the importance of reading books.

'Would like' implies conditional or polite desire, but here a simple present tense 'like' is more appropriate to express habitual action. Also, 'to the libraries' should be 'to libraries' for generalization.

× So everyone encouraged, encourages kids.

✓ So everyone encourages kids.

The sentence mixes past 'encouraged' and present 'encourages'. Since the context is present, only 'encourages' should be used.